Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıt veren bir konu cümlesi ile başlatın ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Örneğin, neden sesinizi beğenmediğinizi ve ailenizin tepkisini daha açık ifade edin.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not good. For example, when I sing around my family, they often ask me to stop because they don't enjoy it.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız kısa ve eksik. Daha doğal ve doğru dilbilgisi kullanarak, neden şarkı söylemeyi öğrenmediğinizi açıklayın. Ayrıca, cevap verirken tekil-çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing because no one in my family is a singer, so I never had the chance to take lessons.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz dilbilgisi açısından hatalı ve anlamı net değil. Cevabınızı daha açık ve doğal hale getirmek için, kime şarkı söylemek istediğinizi ve nedenini net bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları ve anlamsız ifadeleri çıkarın.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my friends because they always support me and enjoy my singing.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak, şarkı söylemenin insanlara nasıl mutluluk getirdiğini açıklayın. Ayrıca, destekleyici detaylar verirken bağlaçları doğru kullanmaya özen gösterin.

Ejemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. Many articles explain that listening to music activates the brain and improves mood.

× Why no I don't like singing because my voice is really bad and when I was singing a music around my family saying please shut up.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is really bad and when I sing music around my family, they say please shut up.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subjects in clauses, causing confusion. 'Why no' is incorrect; it should be 'No'. Also, 'when I was singing a music' should be 'when I sing music' to match the present tense context. The phrase 'around my family saying please shut up' lacks a subject; it should be 'they say please shut up' to clarify who is speaking.

× No, I haven't because my family don't have any singer.

✓ No, I haven't because my family doesn't have any singers.

The subject 'family' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'any singer' should be plural 'any singers' to indicate the general absence of singers in the family.

× Maybe my friends because my friends wants to anything I can sing for them.

✓ Maybe my friends because my friends want me to sing anything for them.

The verb 'wants' should be 'want' to agree with the plural subject 'friends'. Also, the phrase 'wants to anything I can sing for them' is ungrammatical; it should be 'want me to sing anything for them' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Of course, and there are lots of article about that.

✓ Of course, and there are lots of articles about that.

The noun 'article' should be plural 'articles' because 'lots of' refers to a plural quantity.

× And when the music is listening, the brain confession are really big.

✓ And when music is listened to, the brain's connections are really strong.

'The music is listening' is incorrect because music cannot listen; it should be 'music is listened to'. 'Brain confession' is incorrect; likely intended 'brain connections'. Also, 'are really big' is vague; 'are really strong' is more appropriate. The possessive form 'brain's' is needed to show ownership of connections.