Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I do like singing. I consider singing as my hobby whenever and whenever I am free because singing is a thing that I've been doing since I was a kid and I like it a lot because it makes my mind peaceful and makes my voice creative.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
Yes, there was a teacher in my school. He taught me so many rhythms and so many different voices that we have to make while we sing. So his name was and he told me, taught me singing.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
For instance, I want to sing for my father. I also do write some songs but I haven't wrote a song for my father but so I want to write a song for my father in the future and sing for him.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Absolutely, singing can bring happiness to people because it's a very viby hobby to do. And also singing and music brings up the world together so we are able to know the cultures and traditions of other people as well, so which creates a type of integrity among the people.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and shows your interest in singing, but it is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "whenever and whenever" and focus on making your sentences more natural and fluid. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing very much. It's been my hobby since childhood, and I often sing in my free time because it helps me relax and express my creativity.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete information, such as the teacher's name. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and repetitive. Try to give a clear and complete response with proper sentence structure and avoid redundancy.
Ejemplo: Yes, I learned to sing at school from a music teacher who taught me various rhythms and vocal techniques to improve my singing skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your intention well but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Pay attention to verb tenses (e.g., "haven't written" instead of "haven't wrote") and try to make your sentences more concise and coherent using linking words.
Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my father. Although I write songs, I haven't written one for him yet, but I hope to compose and sing a special song for him in the future.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains informal language like "viby" and some awkward phrasing. Try to use more formal vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.
Ejemplo: Absolutely, singing can bring happiness because it is an enjoyable activity. Moreover, music connects people worldwide by allowing us to learn about different cultures and traditions, which fosters unity among us.
Gramática
× I haven't wrote a song for my father but so I want to write a song for my father in the future and sing for him.
✓ I haven't written a song for my father but I want to write a song for my father in the future and sing for him.
The verb 'wrote' is the simple past tense, but after 'haven't' (have not), the past participle form 'written' should be used to form the present perfect tense correctly.
× I haven't wrote a song for my father but so I want to write a song for my father in the future and sing for him.
✓ I haven't written a song for my father, but I want to write a song for my father in the future and sing for him.
The conjunction 'but so' is incorrect and redundant. Using just 'but' is appropriate to contrast the two ideas clearly.
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