Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite long and somewhat repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your thoughts with supporting details using linking words like 'however' or 'although'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. However, I believe singing is a natural talent that not everyone has. Although I haven't had formal training, I would love to learn if I get the chance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more formal language and linking words to make it coherent. Avoid contractions like 'gonna' and use proper tense. Also, provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. However, if I had the opportunity, I would definitely take it because I understand that singing requires natural talent and a lot of practice.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks a clear topic sentence and is somewhat informal. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear statement, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: I haven't really thought about singing for others. Mainly, I sing for my own enjoyment, and I often sing along when I listen to my favourite songs.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but brief. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details using linking words to explain why singing brings happiness.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and connect with others. For example, singing can lift one's mood and reduce stress.

× I really like to sing, but unfortunately I didn't get the skill.

✓ I really like singing, but unfortunately I don't have the skill.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'didn't get the skill' is incorrect; the present tense 'don't have the skill' is appropriate here to express a current lack of ability.

× I heard that this skill only gets when you're born.

✓ I heard that this skill only comes when you're born.

The verb 'get' is not appropriate here; 'comes' is the correct verb to express that a skill is innate. Also, 'only gets' is incorrect; the subject 'skill' is singular, so 'comes' fits better.

× Like it's a born skill.

✓ Like it's a skill you're born with.

The phrase 'born skill' is awkward; the correct expression is 'a skill you're born with' to indicate an innate ability.

× It's not like you can practice and then you can learn singing.

✓ It's not like you can practice and then learn singing.

The phrase 'then you can learn singing' is redundant; 'then learn singing' is more concise and grammatically correct.

× So I would like to have an opportunity if I can learn because I'm always loves to sing.

✓ So I would like to have an opportunity to learn because I always love to sing.

The phrase 'if I can learn' is awkward; 'to learn' is the correct infinitive form. Also, 'I'm always loves' is incorrect; it should be 'I always love' to match subject and verb agreement.

× Not really, but if I'm gonna get an opportunity, I would love to take it.

✓ Not really, but if I get an opportunity, I would love to take it.

The informal 'gonna' should be replaced with 'going to' or simply 'if I get' for formal correctness. Also, 'would love' is correct here as a conditional expression.

× But I know this is a natural talent and it was gonna take a lot of time to learn this skill.

✓ But I know this is a natural talent and it is going to take a lot of time to learn this skill.

The phrase 'was gonna' is incorrect; the present tense 'is going to' is appropriate to express future intention or expectation.

× I never think about it, I think I just want to sing to give pleasure to me only.

✓ I never think about it; I think I just want to sing to give pleasure to myself only.

The phrase 'give pleasure to me only' is awkward; 'to myself only' is the correct reflexive pronoun usage here.

× And whenever I listen songs I try to sing along with it.

✓ And whenever I listen to songs, I try to sing along with them.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'songs' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.