Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, then adding a reason or example. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, although it can be quite challenging because of the techniques involved. However, I often go to KTV with my friends just for fun and to relax.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your reason. Keep your sentences simple and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't formally learnt how to sing because I see it as a leisure activity. I prefer to enjoy singing casually with friends without focusing on complex techniques.

Sugerencia: Your answer has unclear phrasing and some repetition. Make sure to directly answer the question and use linking words to add specific details. Also, check your grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my best friend because he has supported me a lot. For instance, when I was sick, he cooked food to help me recover, so singing for him would be a way to show my gratitude.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete.

Ejemplo: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because melodies can change people's moods and help relieve stress. As a result, people who enjoy music often feel more energetic and positive.

× Honestly speaking, singing is very difficult for me since there are too many techniques to to optimize how to sing however I will.

✓ Honestly speaking, singing is very difficult for me since there are too many techniques to optimize how to sing; however, I will try.

The original sentence has a repeated word 'to' and lacks clarity at the end. Adding 'try' after 'I will' completes the meaning. Also, a semicolon or period is needed before 'however' to separate the clauses properly.

× I used to hang out with my friend to go to KTV because it's just for fun.

✓ I used to hang out with my friend and go to KTV because it's just for fun.

The phrase 'hang out with my friend to go to KTV' is awkward. Using 'and' connects the two activities properly. 'To' suggests purpose, which is not appropriate here.

× Unless he's speaking, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't want to put too many effort.

✓ Unless he's speaking, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't want to put in too much effort.

'Effort' is an uncountable noun, so 'too many' is incorrect; it should be 'too much'. Also, the phrase 'put effort' requires the preposition 'in'.

× It's just a leisure so we we can just enjoy ourselves to our songs without learn too many complex skills.

✓ It's just leisure, so we can just enjoy ourselves with our songs without learning too many complex skills.

'Leisure' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'enjoy ourselves to our songs' is incorrect; 'with our songs' is better. Also, 'without learn' should be 'without learning' to use the gerund after 'without'.

× I would like to think for my best friends.

✓ I would like to sing for my best friends.

The verb 'think' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'sing'. Also, 'for' is the correct preposition with 'sing' when indicating the audience.

× For example, he helps me a lot and when I was sick he cooked some food to energize myself.

✓ For example, he helped me a lot and when I was sick he cooked some food to energize me.

The verb 'helps' should be in past tense 'helped' to match the past context. Also, 'energize myself' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun is unnecessary here, so 'energize me' is correct.

× So I want to think, think and thanks to him.

✓ So I want to think, think and thank him.

'Thanks' is a noun or third person singular verb; here, the verb 'thank' is needed. Also, repeating 'think' is likely an error; it should be 'thank'.

× Definitely yes because the melody will will change people's mind and to use the stress, shake the tension off so people learning music can be more energetic than the others.

✓ Definitely yes because the melody will change people's minds, help relieve stress, and shake the tension off so people learning music can be more energetic than others.

The sentence has repeated 'will'. 'People's mind' should be plural 'minds'. The phrase 'to use the stress' is incorrect; 'help relieve stress' is better. Also, 'than the others' should be 'than others' for general comparison.