Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Well, I don't like singing because people say my voice is too low, that I'm not decent for singing. But I do sing when I'm alone, when when no one's around me, and I won't be embarrassed.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
I've never had singing classes except from the music classes held in primary and middle schools. Other than that, I had no idea of any extra information to music or singing or drama. Well, to be frank, I am not really interested in.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
If I can sing for a person, I would like to sing for my girlfriend to show my love to her because I don't usually sing to anybody since my singing skills are not that good. So if I sing to a person, that indicates trust and love that I'm trying to devote myself.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, I do think that singing can bring happiness and pleasure to people, especially when you are good at singing and you are willing to sing. Using your voice and your breathing to synchronize and to perform a good singing skill can certainly be a good practice for your health.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但存在重复（"when when"）和表达不够简洁的问题。建议避免重复，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。
Ejemplo: I don't like singing because my voice is quite low, and people have told me I'm not very good at it. However, I do enjoy singing when I'm alone, as I don't feel embarrassed then.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但表达略显笨拙，部分句子不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免使用"had no idea"这种不准确的表达。
Ejemplo: I have only taken music classes during primary and middle school, but I haven't had any formal singing lessons. To be honest, I'm not very interested in pursuing singing further.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但句子较长且有些重复。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: If I were to sing for someone, it would be my girlfriend to express my love. I don't usually sing for others because I'm not confident in my singing skills, so singing for her would show my trust and affection.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 85.0Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富且有逻辑，但部分表达略显复杂且不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达。
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness, especially if you enjoy it and have some skill. Singing also helps improve breathing and can be good for your health.
Gramática
× I've never had singing classes except from the music classes held in primary and middle schools.
✓ I've never had singing classes except the music classes held in primary and middle schools.
这里的介词“from”使用不当，应该直接用“except”后接名词短语，表示“除了……之外”。
× Well, to be frank, I am not really interested in.
✓ Well, to be frank, I am not really interested in it.
句子缺少宾语，介词“in”后面需要跟宾语，这里应补充“it”来完成句子结构。
× If I can sing for a person, I would like to sing for my girlfriend to show my love to her because I don't usually sing to anybody since my singing skills are not that good.
✓ If I can sing for a person, I would like to sing to my girlfriend to show my love to her because I don't usually sing to anybody since my singing skills are not that good.
动词“sing”后面通常用介词“to”表示“为某人唱歌”，而不是“for”。
× Using your voice and your breathing to synchronize and to perform a good singing skill can certainly be a good practice for your health.
✓ Using your voice and your breathing to synchronize and perform good singing skills can certainly be good practice for your health.
“perform”后面不需要“to”，且“a good singing skill”应改为复数形式“good singing skills”，表示多种唱歌技巧。
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