Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of your favorite music genres or artists to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing because it is a powerful form of art that expresses emotions. I enjoy various genres such as pop, rock, and R&B, especially girl groups and K-pop bands like Blackpink.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by using more formal language and linking words to make it coherent. Also, specify which instruments you learned to add detail and interest.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing at school where we had a dedicated music teacher. Additionally, as a child, I practiced classical Nepali songs and also learned to play instruments like the guitar and piano.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why you want to sing for these people.

Ejemplo: I would love to sing for my family and close friends because their support means a lot to me, and seeing their pride would be very rewarding.

Sugerencia: Avoid fragmented sentences and improve grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and provide specific examples of how singing affects emotions.

Ejemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness because music comes in many genres, such as happy or sad songs. For instance, listening to an upbeat song often lifts people's moods and makes them feel joyful.

× It is really important form of art that everybody has different perspective and different view on singing.

✓ It is a really important form of art that everybody has a different perspective and a different view on singing.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really important form of art', 'different perspective', and 'different view'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I love different kind of pop music ro rock music and R&B's.

✓ I love different kinds of pop music, rock music, and R&B.

The phrase 'different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' because it refers to multiple types. Also, 'ro' is a typo and should be 'rock'. The plural form 'R&B's' is incorrect because 'R&B' is a genre and does not need a plural form or apostrophe.

× Yeah, I did learn how to sing in my school.

✓ Yeah, I learned how to sing in my school.

The phrase 'did learn' is grammatically correct but sounds unnatural in this context. Using the simple past tense 'learned' is more appropriate and natural for stating past experiences.

× My school has a music teacher, so we are fortunate enough to learn how to sing.

✓ My school has a music teacher, so we are fortunate enough to learn how to sing.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I used to sing classical Nepali music as a kid and I used to learn how to play instruments also.

✓ I used to sing classical Nepali music as a kid and I used to learn how to play instruments as well.

The phrase 'also' at the end is less natural than 'as well' in this context. Changing 'also' to 'as well' improves the sentence flow and correctness.

× I would love to sing for my loved ones, my friends, my families, and the people I love.

✓ I would love to sing for my loved ones, my friends, my family, and the people I love.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple families, but the speaker likely means their own family, which is singular. 'Family' is a collective noun and should be singular in this context.

× I love to suit my talent to them and I would love to see how proud they are for me.

✓ I love to suit my talent to them and I would love to see how proud they are of me.

The phrase 'proud they are for me' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' when expressing pride about someone. Also, no definite article correction is needed here, but the preposition is corrected.

× Sing. Singing is very subjective matter.

✓ Singing is a very subjective matter.

The word 'Sing.' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be removed. Also, 'very subjective matter' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'very' to be grammatically correct.

× There are happy songs, sad song and all the different kinds of genre we can found in singing.

✓ There are happy songs, sad songs, and all the different kinds of genres we can find in singing.

The phrase 'sad song' should be plural 'sad songs' to match 'happy songs'. 'Kinds of genre' should be 'kinds of genres' because 'kinds' is plural and requires the noun to be plural as well. 'Found' should be 'find' to match the present tense.

× And I do think singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ And I do think singing can bring happiness to people.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× If you are listening to happy song, you will definitely be happy.

✓ If you are listening to a happy song, you will definitely be happy.

The phrase 'happy song' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.