Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes I like singing but I always sing when there's no one to hear my voice because I really scared of people will hear my voice and I so shy of that. And singing is the way I relax and express myself also really.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I haven't. The reason for this is that I never have the plan to be a professional singer and I find it so hard and I don't have many time to spend on singing so I don't going to learn how to sing.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I would like to sing for myself. Uh, singing for myself makes me feel more personal and uh, privacy. I don't really like someone can hear my voice. So as I was a side person and as I'm an introverted one too.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people. For me, when I sing, I can feel the emotion that the songwriter had put into the lyrics, which helps me connect with their feelings. Singing also allows me to express my own emotions and I feel more relaxed and joyful.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. However, I usually sing only when I'm alone since I'm shy and afraid that others might hear my voice.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích rõ ràng với các lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.
Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I don't plan to become a professional singer. Also, I find singing difficult and don't have much time to practice.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác và nói lắp. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, dùng câu chủ đề và giải thích lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.
Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because it feels more personal and private. Since I am an introverted person, I don't like others hearing my voice.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một vài từ vựng phong phú hơn và liên từ để câu văn mượt mà hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. When I sing, I connect with the emotions conveyed by the songwriter, which helps me express my own feelings and feel relaxed and joyful.
Gramática
× I really scared of people will hear my voice and I so shy of that.
✓ I am really scared that people will hear my voice and I am so shy about that.
The phrase 'scared of people will hear' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'scared that people will hear'. Also, 'so shy of that' should be 'so shy about that' because 'shy' is followed by 'about' when referring to a situation or thing.
× I don't going to learn how to sing.
✓ I am not going to learn how to sing.
The phrase 'I don't going' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I am not going' because 'going to' is used with the verb 'to be' in the present tense to express future intention.
× I don't really like someone can hear my voice.
✓ I don't really like anyone to hear my voice.
The word 'someone' is incorrect here because it refers to an unspecified person in affirmative sentences. In negative sentences, 'anyone' is used. Also, the structure 'someone can hear' is awkward; 'anyone to hear' fits better.
× So as I was a side person and as I'm an introverted one too.
✓ So I am a shy person and I am an introvert too.
The phrase 'a side person' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'shy'. Also, 'as I was' is incorrect in this context; present tense 'I am' fits better. 'Introverted one' is better expressed as 'introvert'.
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