Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi, ancak bazı cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve ifade açısından küçük hatalar var. "It maybe sounds weird" yerine "It may sound weird" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "who really I am for me" ifadesi yerine "who I really am" daha doğru olur. Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru yapmak için bu tür ifadeleri düzeltmelisiniz.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel alive. It may sound strange, but when I sing, I feel like I can express myself much better. Singing is a way to show who I really am.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde "I've never got any professional help or I didn't get any education on it" ifadesi biraz karışık ve dilbilgisi açısından hatalı. "I have never received any professional training" gibi daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, "like trying again over and over again" ifadesi yerine "by practicing repeatedly" demek daha uygun olur.

Ejemplo: I have never received any professional training, but I have tried to improve my singing by practicing repeatedly on my own.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde "artists for the artist" ifadesi anlam açısından net değil ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I believe that artists should create for themselves" gibi daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, "I'm gonna keep it" yerine "I will continue" demek daha uygun olur. Cümlelerinizi daha net ve akıcı yapmak için bu tür ifadeleri düzeltmelisiniz.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for myself because I believe that artists should create for themselves. Therefore, I always try to do what feels best for me, and if I enjoy it, I will continue.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız anlamlı ve olumlu, ancak "music helps a lot to improve yourself" ifadesi biraz genel ve belirsiz. Daha spesifik ifadeler kullanarak cümlenizi güçlendirebilirsiniz. Örneğin, "music helps people relax and express their emotions" gibi. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde daha fazla bağlaç kullanarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because music helps them relax and express their emotions better. Therefore, I truly believe it has a positive impact on people's well-being.

× It maybe sounds weird, but it's just like that.

✓ It maybe sounds weird, but it's just like that.

The phrase 'maybe sounds' is incorrect because 'maybe' is an adverb meaning 'perhaps' and should not be combined directly with 'sounds'. The correct form is 'maybe sound' or 'may sound'. Here, 'may sound' is appropriate to express possibility.

× It maybe sounds weird, but it's just like that.

✓ It may sound weird, but it's just like that.

The correct modal verb is 'may' to express possibility, not 'maybe' which is an adverb. So, 'may sound' is correct instead of 'maybe sounds'.

× I love singing, it's just a way to show who really I am for me.

✓ I love singing; it's just a way to show who I really am.

The sentence is a run-on and has awkward word order. 'Who really I am for me' is incorrect; the correct order is 'who I really am'. Also, 'for me' is redundant here and can be omitted for clarity.

× I've never got any professional help or I didn't get any education on it, but I tried to improve it by myself, like trying again over and over again, you know?

✓ I've never gotten any professional help or received any education on it, but I tried to improve by myself, trying again over and over again, you know?

The past participle of 'get' in American English is 'gotten'. Also, 'didn't get any education' is better expressed as 'received any education'. The phrase 'improve it by myself' is awkward; 'improve by myself' is better. The sentence is corrected for proper past tense and clarity.

× I want to sing for myself because I believe that artists for the artist, I believe like that.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I believe that artists are for the artist; I believe that way.

The original sentence is unclear and missing a verb. Adding 'are' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'I believe like that' is awkward; 'I believe that way' is more natural.

× So I always try to do what's best for me and if I feel good by doing it, then I'm gonna keep it.

✓ So I always try to do what's best for me, and if I feel good doing it, then I'm going to keep it.

'Gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred in formal speech. Also, 'feel good by doing it' should be 'feel good doing it' for correct verb usage.