Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'well' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organize your ideas clearly by starting with a direct answer, then giving specific reasons and examples. Use linking words such as 'also' or 'in addition' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me happy. Also, I often sing karaoke with my friends when we get together, which makes the experience even more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I prefer playing musical instruments. I enjoy listening to music more than singing in front of others, so I focus on improving my instrument skills instead.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to speak in complete sentences and organize your thoughts logically. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples with linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my family and friends when we gather because singing is a good way to express feelings. For example, last month I sang a song for my father to show my appreciation, and he was very happy to hear it.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Provide a clear and concise answer with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness because songs often contain strong emotions. For instance, when people feel sad, singing their favorite songs and dancing can lift their mood and make them feel joyful.

× Well, uh, it relieves stress and it brings already happiness, uh, to me.

✓ Well, uh, it relieves stress and it already brings happiness, uh, to me.

The adverb 'already' should be placed before the verb 'brings' to correctly modify it. Placing 'already' after the verb is incorrect in English adverb placement rules.

× And including that, uh, I have a lot of friends who are having a similar, uh, activity like this or whenever we gather together, we have a karaoke singing with each other and including that it is more fun for us.

✓ And including that, uh, I have a lot of friends who are having a similar, uh, activity like this, or whenever we gather together, we have karaoke singing with each other, and including that, it is more fun for us.

The phrase 'a karaoke singing' is incorrect; 'karaoke singing' is an uncountable activity and should not have an article 'a'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× Well, no, I didn't have any learning any singing ability.

✓ Well, no, I haven't had any learning in singing ability.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'didn't have' with 'learning' which is a gerund. The present perfect 'haven't had' is more appropriate to express experience up to now, and 'learning in singing ability' is clearer.

× But yeah, I don't have to.

✓ But yeah, I don't need to.

'Don't have to' implies lack of obligation, but in this context, 'don't need to' better expresses the intended meaning of not requiring to learn singing.

× Instead of learning and singing, I just want to use how to play an instrument because I have to listen music more than singing in the front of the people.

✓ Instead of learning to sing, I just want to learn how to play an instrument because I prefer listening to music more than singing in front of people.

The phrase 'use how to play' is incorrect; 'learn how to play' is correct. Also, 'listen music' should be 'listening to music', and 'in the front of the people' should be 'in front of people'.

× When I think of it for my family and friends when we gather together, I it is very good way to express their feelings to the others.

✓ When I think of it for my family and friends when we gather together, it is a very good way to express our feelings to others.

The pronoun 'I it' is incorrect and redundant; 'it' alone is sufficient. Also, 'their feelings' should be 'our feelings' to match the speaker's perspective, and 'the others' should be 'others' without 'the'.

× So last month I think of a song for my father to express my feeling to her and him.

✓ So last month I thought of a song for my father to express my feelings to him and her.

The past event requires past tense 'thought' instead of 'think'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' and the pronouns 'her and him' should be 'him and her' or clarified who 'her' refers to.

× And he was very he was very happy.

✓ And he was very happy.

The phrase repeats 'he was very' unnecessarily; removing the repetition corrects the sentence.

× So yeah, asking for my father to.

✓ So yeah, I sang for my father too.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Asking for my father to' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'I sang for my father too'.

× Yes, definitely singing uh, bring happiness to the people because uh, it has lots of feeling inside the song.

✓ Yes, definitely singing, uh, brings happiness to people because, uh, it has lots of feelings inside the song.

The verb 'bring' must agree with singular subject 'singing' and be 'brings'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'lots of'.

× Sometimes the uh, the wording of the song, so umm, so he added that they make them happy and when you are uh, when you are sad to sing a song of your favorite singer and then do dance partying and all, then it makes my people happy so.

✓ Sometimes, uh, the words of the song, umm, make people happy. When you are sad, singing a song by your favorite singer and then dancing and partying makes people happy.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns 'he', 'they', 'them', and 'my people' which confuse meaning. 'Wording' should be 'words'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.