Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and plural nouns, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I enjoy singing because it makes me happy and allows me to share joyful moments with my family and friends.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear and direct response, using linking words to organise your ideas. Avoid repeating words and try to use more precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learnt how to sing in my class, where the teacher taught me techniques such as singing in high or loud tones.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Make sure to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct verb forms and avoiding redundancy.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my mum because she has taught me many things, like how to study English and cook, and I believe my singing would make her happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: I believe singing brings happiness to people because when I sing, those around me feel joyful, which in turn makes me happy and encourages me to sing even more.

× I like singing because singing make me enjoyable and I can be happy with my family and my friend.

✓ I like singing because singing makes me happy and I can be happy with my family and my friends.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'enjoyable' is an adjective meaning 'giving enjoyment' but here the correct word is 'happy' to express the feeling. Additionally, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the plural 'family' and to indicate more than one friend.

× I have already learned about how to sing in my class.

✓ I have already learned how to sing in my class.

The phrase 'learned about how to sing' is incorrect because 'learn' is directly followed by the infinitive 'how to sing' without 'about'. 'About' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× In my class they taught me about how how to thinking.

✓ In my class they taught me how to think.

The phrase 'taught me about how how to thinking' is incorrect. 'About' is unnecessary, 'how' is repeated, and 'thinking' should be the base form 'think' after 'how to'.

× They have told me about how to sing high tone or loud tone.

✓ They have told me how to sing in a high tone or loud tone.

The phrase 'about how to sing high tone or loud tone' is incorrect. 'About' is unnecessary, and 'high tone' and 'loud tone' need the preposition 'in' to indicate the manner of singing.

× I want to sing for my mom because my mom has taught me about everything like how to study English and cook and when I have sing for my mom and mom, you feel happy.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because my mom has taught me everything, like how to study English and cook, and when I sing for my mom, she feels happy.

The phrase 'when I have sing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I sing' (present tense) to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'has taught me about everything' should be 'has taught me everything' without 'about'. The repetition 'and mom' is unnecessary. 'You feel happy' should be 'she feels happy' to refer correctly to the mother.

× I think seeing you bring happiness to people because when you sing, many people around me is you happy and it will make me happy too, so I can sing more and more fun.

✓ I think singing brings happiness to people because when you sing, many people around me are happy and it makes me happy too, so I can sing more and have more fun.

'Seeing' should be 'singing' to match the context. 'You bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Many people around me is you happy' is incorrect; it should be 'many people around me are happy'. 'It will make me happy' should be 'it makes me happy' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Sing more and more fun' should be 'sing more and have more fun' to use the correct verb and expression.