Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and natural, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your response concise. Instead of repeating 'I am not a good singer' and 'I am just a bathroom singer', you can combine these ideas. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I am not very fond of singing because I consider myself a bathroom singer, but I do enjoy singing romantic songs privately in my room.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use correct tense and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer more logical. Be specific about what you learned.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing during my school days. My music teacher taught us how to perform in public, and I learned the basics of singing, including pitch and rhythm.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Avoid informal phrases like 'biggest spectator of that thing'. Also, keep sentences concise and clear.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my two-year-old son because he loves rhymes and poems. For example, I often sing the famous rhyme 'The Wheels on the Bus' to cheer him up, and he enjoys it a lot.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative and uses good vocabulary, but try to make it more natural and less formal. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps relax the mind and soul. Moreover, it can improve mood by releasing serotonin, which makes us feel good.

× Yes, I do have learned how to sing in my school days.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my school days.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'do have learned' which is not a proper past tense form. The correct simple past tense 'learned' should be used here to indicate a completed action in the past.

× my school music teacher usually give the lecture on how to perform in public.

✓ my school music teacher usually gave the lecture on how to perform in public.

The subject 'teacher' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular past tense 'gave' instead of 'give' to agree with the subject and the past time frame.

× So I have learned the basic auto tunes of singing during my days of the school.

✓ So I learned the basic auto tunes of singing during my days at school.

The present perfect 'have learned' is less appropriate here because the time frame 'during my days of the school' refers to a finished period in the past. Also, 'at school' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× He's a 2 year old toddler so he loves rhymes and poems so I prefer to sing in front of him the famous poem that is the Wheels on the Bus.

✓ He's a 2-year-old toddler, so he loves rhymes and poems, so I prefer to sing to him the famous song 'The Wheels on the Bus'.

The phrase '2 year old' should be hyphenated as '2-year-old' when used as an adjective. Also, 'sing in front of him the famous poem' is awkward; 'sing to him' is more natural. 'The Wheels on the Bus' is a song, not a poem, so it is better to call it a song and use quotation marks.

× so I prefer to sing in front of him the famous poem that is the Wheels on the Bus.

✓ so I prefer to sing to him the famous poem that is the Wheels on the Bus.

The preposition 'in front of' is incorrect here because it implies physical location rather than the act of singing directed at someone. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating the recipient of singing.

× He will be very cheerful and I'll be the biggest spectator of that thing.

✓ He will be very cheerful and I'll be the biggest spectator of that.

The phrase 'that thing' is vague and unnecessary. Simply saying 'that' is clearer and more natural in this context.

× Singing can bring a lot of blissfulness in people's life because singing is that kind of thing that brings relaxation in the person's mind and soul, and it actually elevates the mood of the person by inducing the hormone serotonin.

✓ Singing can bring a lot of happiness to people's lives because singing is the kind of activity that brings relaxation to a person's mind and soul, and it actually elevates a person's mood by inducing the hormone serotonin.

'Blissfulness' is less commonly used; 'happiness' is more natural. 'People's life' should be plural 'people's lives'. 'That kind of thing' is vague; 'activity' is more precise. Prepositions 'in' should be 'to' when referring to 'relaxation to the mind and soul'. Also, 'the person' is better as 'a person' for general statements.