Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích hát khi căng thẳng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I usually singing" nên là "I usually sing".

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing very much. When I feel stressed, I usually sing to relax myself. My friends often tell me that I have a talent for singing, which makes me enjoy it even more.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và nói trực tiếp về việc bạn học hát hay không, kèm theo lý do hoặc cách bạn học hát nếu có.

Ejemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I usually learn by listening to songs and repeating the lyrics and melodies of other singers.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn muốn hát cho ai và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my parents because they always encourage me and support me when I try to sing.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "singing is not bring" mà nên là "singing not only brings". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. Singing not only brings happiness to people but also improves their mood. When you sing or listen to meaningful lyrics and beautiful melodies, it can make you feel better.

× Well when I get in stress I usually singing to other peoples and they they said I have a talent in singing so I really like to sing when I am stressed.

✓ Well, when I get stressed, I usually sing to other people and they say I have a talent in singing, so I really like to sing when I am stressed.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; it should be the base form 'sing' because modal verbs and expressions of frequency are followed by the base verb. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. The tense consistency is maintained by using 'say' instead of 'said' because the statement is general.

× Well, I never learned how to sing.

✓ Well, I have never learned how to sing.

The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now, rather than simple past 'never learned' which refers to a specific past time.

× I just repeat the thing the the lyric and the singing of other singer so but other people's when here I singing they are they call me a talent of.

✓ I just repeat the lyrics and singing of other singers, so when I sing, other people call me talented.

'Lyric' should be plural 'lyrics' when referring to song words. 'Singing' is correct as a noun here, but 'other singer' should be plural 'other singers'. 'When here I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I sing'. 'They call me a talent of' is incorrect; it should be 'they call me talented' or 'they say I have talent'.

× Well, I really want to sing with other people, but to tell their people that I want to sing for I think it is my parents, because when I was trying my mother here, what I saying and see encourage me a lot and give.

✓ Well, I really want to sing with other people, but if I have to say who I want to sing for, I think it is my parents, because when I was trying, my mother heard what I was saying and encouraged me a lot.

'Their people' is incorrect; it should be 'who I want to sing for'. 'Trying my mother here' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'trying, my mother heard'. 'See encourage me' is incorrect; it should be 'encouraged me'. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, of course singing is not bring the happiness to people but also improve the mood of each other.

✓ Yes, of course, singing not only brings happiness to people but also improves the mood of each other.

'Singing is not bring' is incorrect; it should be 'singing brings' because the subject is singular and the verb must agree. Also, 'not only... but also' structure requires parallel verbs: 'brings' and 'improves'.

× When you sing or you are listening to the singer because they are lyric sometimes is meaningful and the melody is great.

✓ When you sing or listen to a singer, sometimes the lyrics are meaningful and the melody is great.

'They are lyric' is incorrect; it should be 'the lyrics are'. Also, 'you are listening to the singer because' is awkward; better to say 'when you sing or listen to a singer'. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.