Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Actually, I don't really enjoy singing because I feel a bit embarrassed and shy when I perform in front of others. Besides, my vocal skills are not very strong, so I usually prefer to sing quietly by myself rather than out loud. For example, I often sing along to music when I'm alone at home, which feels more comfortable.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally before. I usually just sing along by myself for fun. However, when I want to improve my skills, I watch YouTube tutorials or videos of famous singers and try to follow their techniques.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I would probably want to sing for my boyfriend because although I don't have very good singing skills, he always appreciates my efforts and understand the love I express through my singing. For example, even if I'm not perfect, he encourages me and enjoys listening, which makes me feel more confident.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, I totally agree that singing can brings happiness to people. When we sing together, sharing the same lyrics and rhythm, it creates a strong sense of connections and unity among us. This shared experience not only lifts our spirits but also fosters a feeling of community and belonging.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 85.0Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 'embarrassed and shy' 대신 좀 더 다양한 표현을 사용하고, 연결어를 추가하여 문장 간 흐름을 더 부드럽게 만드는 연습을 해보세요.
Ejemplo: I don't particularly enjoy singing because I often feel self-conscious and nervous when performing in front of others. Therefore, I usually prefer to sing softly by myself. For instance, I often sing along to my favorite songs when I'm alone at home, which makes me feel more at ease.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 90.0Sugerencia: 답변이 명확하고 구체적이지만, 'however' 외에 다른 연결어를 사용해 다양성을 높이고, 문장 길이를 조금 더 조절해 보세요.
Ejemplo: I haven't received any professional singing lessons. Instead, I usually sing for fun on my own. When I want to improve, I watch YouTube tutorials and imitate famous singers' techniques to practice.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 88.0Sugerencia: 답변이 감정 표현이 잘 되어 있으나, 문장 구조를 조금 더 간결하게 하고, 'because' 대신 다양한 이유 연결어를 사용해 보세요.
Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my boyfriend since he always appreciates my efforts despite my limited singing skills. For example, even when I'm not perfect, he encourages me and enjoys listening, which boosts my confidence.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 92.0Sugerencia: 답변이 매우 좋지만, 'can brings'의 문법 오류를 수정하고, 연결어를 다양하게 사용하여 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 더욱 강화해 보세요.
Ejemplo: Yes, I completely agree that singing can bring happiness to people. When we sing together, sharing the same lyrics and rhythm, it creates a strong sense of connection and unity. Moreover, this shared experience lifts our spirits and fosters a feeling of community and belonging.
Gramática
× he always appreciates my efforts and understand the love I express through my singing.
✓ he always appreciates my efforts and understands the love I express through my singing.
The subject 'he' requires the verb to be in third person singular form. 'understand' should be 'understands' to agree with the singular subject.
× Yes, I totally agree that singing can brings happiness to people.
✓ Yes, I totally agree that singing can bring happiness to people.
Modal verbs like 'can' are followed by the base form of the verb without 's'. 'brings' should be 'bring' after 'can'.
× it creates a strong sense of connections and unity among us.
✓ it creates a strong sense of connection and unity among us.
The phrase 'a strong sense of' should be followed by a singular noun. 'connections' should be 'connection' to match the singular sense.
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