Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'it's not my thoughts at all' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy singing because it's not something I feel comfortable doing. Instead, I prefer activities like dancing or drawing, which help me relax and express my creativity. Therefore, I rarely go to karaoke with my friends.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp thì quá khứ hoàn thành và cách dùng từ như 'priority priority' không đúng. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn chưa học hát.

Ejemplo: I have never learned how to sing because I was always busy studying other subjects like maths, literature, and history, which were quite stressful. As a result, I didn't have enough time to focus on singing lessons.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'instructing question' không phù hợp, và câu 'if I had the truth' cũng không đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I haven't really thought about who I would sing for, but if I had to choose, it would be my parents because they have always been supportive and encourage me to try new things.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'bring beneficial' không đúng, 'tearful songs' cũng không phù hợp với ý muốn diễn đạt. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý một cách hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: Absolutely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because listening to uplifting songs can improve your mood and make you feel more positive. Singing is also a great way to express your emotions and relieve stress.

× I prefer dancing or drawing, which not only help me blow up some steam but also let my imagination run wild.

✓ I prefer dancing or drawing, which not only helps me blow off some steam but also lets my imagination run wild.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to the singular noun phrase 'dancing or drawing' treated as singular, so the verbs 'help' and 'let' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' and 'lets'. Also, the idiomatic expression is 'blow off some steam' not 'blow up some steam'.

× To be honest, I had never learned how to sing 'cause even if a memory serves me right, I have to study another subjects like maths, literature or history, which was so stressful.

✓ To be honest, I had never learned how to sing because, if my memory serves me right, I had to study other subjects like maths, literature or history, which was so stressful.

The phrase 'if a memory serves me right' should be 'if my memory serves me right'. The verb tense should be consistent in the past: 'had to study' instead of 'have to study'. Also, 'another subjects' is incorrect; it should be 'other subjects' because 'subjects' is plural.

× So I don't have enough time to priority priority.

✓ So I don't have enough time to prioritize.

The phrase 'to priority priority' is incorrect. The correct verb form is 'to prioritize', meaning to arrange or deal with in order of importance.

× That is an instructing question, but I have never thought about it before.

✓ That is an interesting question, but I have never thought about it before.

The adjective 'instructing' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'interesting' to describe a question that catches attention.

× But if I had the truth, it's definitely my parents 'cause they are always supportive and encourage me to try a new flight, but my friends don't remember.

✓ But if I had to be honest, it's definitely my parents because they are always supportive and encourage me to try new things, but my friends don't remember.

The phrase 'if I had the truth' is incorrect; it should be 'if I had to be honest'. Also, 'a new flight' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'a new thing' or 'new things'. The phrase 'my friends don't remember' is unclear and likely incorrect in context.

× Absolutely, I believe that singing can bring beneficial to other people 'cause listening to a tearful songs can improve your mood and boost and make you feel more positive and seeing yourself can be a good way to put.

✓ Absolutely, I believe that singing can be beneficial to other people because listening to tearful songs can improve your mood and boost your spirits, making you feel more positive, and seeing yourself can be a good way to express yourself.

The phrase 'bring beneficial' is incorrect; it should be 'be beneficial'. 'A tearful songs' is incorrect; 'songs' is plural so 'a' should be removed. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs restructuring for clarity and correct idiomatic expressions.