Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并用具体例子支持。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, I once won a singing contest at my secondary school, which boosted my confidence.

Sugerencia: 回答中句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅，同时注意代词和介词的正确使用。

Ejemplo: I haven't had formal singing lessons, but my talented friends have taught me some techniques to use my voice better.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意主谓一致和冠词的使用，同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: I would love to sing for an artist I admire because I am a big fan of his work. I am excited to meet him next Wednesday since his unique style has inspired me a lot.

Sugerencia: 回答中句子过长且结构混乱，建议分句表达观点，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰，同时避免重复和不完整的句子。

Ejemplo: Definitely yes. Singing helps people relax and is an engaging activity. When others listen to your voice, they often feel calm, and you share the same emotions in that moment.

× I like singing because I am quite talent on singing.

✓ I like singing because I am quite talented at singing.

这里 'talent' 是名词，应该用形容词 'talented' 来描述人的能力，且介词应为 'at' 而非 'on'。

× I have attempt the singing contest in my secondary school which I have won.

✓ I have attempted the singing contest in my secondary school which I have won.

动词 'attempt' 在完成时态中应使用过去分词形式 'attempted'。

× So singing for me is the things that I can feeling relax and chill.

✓ So singing for me is the thing that makes me feel relaxed and chill.

'things' 应为单数 'thing'，且 'feeling' 应改为动词原形 'feel'，'relax' 应为形容词 'relaxed'。

× So I do like sing.

✓ So I do like to sing.

动词 'like' 后应接不定式 'to sing'，而非动词原形 'sing'。

× Officially, I haven't learned how to sing by the singing coach.

✓ Officially, I haven't learned how to sing from a singing coach.

'learned' 用法正确，但介词应为 'from' 表示从某人那里学。

× However, I have asked my friend to teach me how to sing which they are talented on singing so I can learn something new on my friends because they can teach me how to use my voice properly.

✓ However, I have asked my friend to teach me how to sing because he is talented at singing, so I can learn something new from my friend because he can teach me how to use my voice properly.

'friend' 是单数，代词应为 'he'，介词应为 'at'，'on my friends' 应为 'from my friend'。

× I would like to sing for artists who I really am near because I am a big fans of his work.

✓ I would like to sing for an artist who I am really close to because I am a big fan of his work.

'artists' 应为单数 'artist'，'am near' 应改为 'am really close to'，'fans' 应为单数 'fan'。

× I'm looking forward to meeting him Wednesday since he is very talented and creative in making music.

✓ I'm looking forward to meeting him on Wednesday since he is very talented and creative in making music.

表示具体日期时，'Wednesday' 前应加介词 'on'。

× His unique style inspired me a lot and it would be honored to perform with him.

✓ His unique style inspires me a lot and it would be an honor to perform with him.

时态应为一般现在时 'inspires'，'honored' 应为名词 'honor'，前面加不定冠词 'an'。

× Definitely yes, because singing can relax yourself and it is a engaging activity when you sing and then people listen to your voice and they will feel calm also and you will share the same feelings in that moment.

✓ Definitely yes, because singing can relax you and it is an engaging activity when you sing. Then people listen to your voice and they will feel calm, and you will share the same feelings at that moment.

'yourself' 应为 'you'，'a engaging' 应为 'an engaging'，句子应分开以避免过长，'in that moment' 应为 'at that moment'。