Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "feel more better" should be "feel better," and "Often sing a song" lacks a subject. Try to use complete sentences and correct grammar to sound more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me reduce stress and feel better. I often sing songs with my friends during karaoke sessions, which is always fun and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "classicals" should be "classical music," and "experiment experience" is confusing. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in school, I took a music class that focused on singing. I enjoyed practicing different styles, such as classical music and pop. This experience helped me improve my concentration and gain more confidence in singing.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "have always support me" should be "have always supported me," and "is a part of traditional" is unclear. Try to use correct verb forms and clarify your ideas.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me and stayed calm during difficult times. Singing together at family gatherings is a tradition. When I sing for them, I feel more comfortable and happier.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, "can bringing" should be "can bring," and the last sentence is incomplete. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is closely connected to emotions. People can express their feelings through songs, which helps them feel more comfortable and relaxed when they listen to music.

× Yes, I like singing because it helps me to reduce my stress and feel more better.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me to reduce my stress and feel better.

The phrase 'more better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative form of 'good' and does not need 'more'. Using 'more' with 'better' is redundant and grammatically incorrect.

× Often sing a song with my friends during karaoke.

✓ I often sing songs with my friends during karaoke.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. Adding 'I' as the subject and changing 'sing a song' to 'sing songs' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When I was in school, there was a music class that focused on singing and I enjoy practicing different styles such as classicals and pop.

✓ When I was in school, there was a music class that focused on singing and I enjoyed practicing different styles such as classical and pop.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is past ('was in school'), 'enjoy' should be changed to past tense 'enjoyed'. Also, 'classicals' is incorrect; 'classical' is an adjective describing music genres.

× When I was in school, there was a music class that focused on singing and I enjoy practicing different styles such as classicals and pop.

✓ When I was in school, there was a music class that focused on singing and I enjoyed practicing different styles such as classical and pop.

The word 'classicals' is incorrect because 'classical' is an adjective and should not be pluralized. The correct form is 'classical' to describe the music style.

× This experiment experience helps me improve my focus skills and gain more confidence in this singing.

✓ This experience helped me improve my focus skills and gain more confidence in singing.

The phrase 'experiment experience' is awkward and likely incorrect; 'experience' alone suffices. Also, since the context is past, 'helps' should be 'helped'. 'In this singing' is incorrect; 'in singing' is the proper phrase.

× I want to sing for my family because they have always support me and stay calm in my difficult situations.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me and stayed calm in my difficult situations.

The verbs 'support' and 'stay' should be in past participle form 'supported' and 'stayed' to agree with 'have always'. This is a subject-verb agreement and tense consistency issue.

× Singing with family and gatherings is a part of traditional.

✓ Singing with family and gatherings is a part of tradition.

The word 'traditional' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun form is 'tradition'.

× When I sing for my family, I feel more comfortable and feeling better.

✓ When I sing for my family, I feel more comfortable and better.

The phrase 'feeling better' is incorrect here because it does not parallel 'feel more comfortable'. Both should be in the same verb form 'feel'. Also, 'more better' is incorrect; 'better' alone suffices.

× Yes, I think singing can bringing happiness to people because it is closely connected with emotions and the feelings of peoples which they can express their oath within a song.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is closely connected with emotions and the feelings of people which they can express their oath within a song.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'.

× Yes, I think singing can bringing happiness to people because it is closely connected with emotions and the feelings of peoples which they can express their oath within a song.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is closely connected with emotions and the feelings of people which they can express their oath within a song.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural noun. 'Peoples' is used to refer to distinct ethnic groups, which is not the intended meaning.

× They can also bring feel more comfortable when they listen to the music and reduce the.

✓ They can also feel more comfortable when they listen to music and reduce stress.

The phrase 'bring feel more comfortable' is incorrect; 'feel more comfortable' is correct. Also, 'the music' can be 'music' in general. The sentence ends abruptly with 'reduce the.' which is incomplete; adding 'stress' completes the thought.