Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to keep your response concise and directly answer the question with clear sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'Music makes so easy and just reliefs from the stress of the traffic,' you could say 'Music makes the journey easier and helps relieve stress during traffic.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it brings me positivity and good vibes. For instance, I often sing in the morning while driving to work, which helps me relax and reduces the stress caused by traffic.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and irrelevant information. Also, use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. For example, you could say 'Yes, I learned singing in secondary school, but I don't think I have much talent. However, I still enjoy singing, especially when I am alone, like in the shower or for my children.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing during secondary school music classes. Although I don't consider myself very talented, I still enjoy singing, especially when I'm in the shower or singing for my children.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect your points and be specific about why you sing for these people. For example, you could say 'I often sing for my children because it entertains them and helps us spend quality time together. I also like to sing for my husband to make him happy.'

Ejemplo: I usually sing for my children because it entertains them and allows us to bond. Additionally, I enjoy singing for my husband to brighten his day.

Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Make sure to use the correct words and sentence structures. Also, provide specific examples to support your opinion. For instance, you could say 'Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it is a common part of celebrations like weddings and religious ceremonies, which bring people together and create joyful moments.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. For example, at weddings and religious ceremonies, singing unites everyone and creates joyful memories.

× Yes, I love singing and I wish I have a voice for singing properly.

✓ Yes, I love singing and I wish I had a voice for singing properly.

The sentence uses 'wish' which requires a past tense verb to express a hypothetical or unreal situation. 'I wish I have' is incorrect; it should be 'I wish I had' to indicate a desire contrary to reality.

× It just give me so good vibe and positivity.

✓ It just gives me such a good vibe and positivity.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives' not 'give'. Also, 'so good vibe' is incorrect; 'such a good vibe' is the correct expression.

× Especially in the morning when you go to work and you are driving in the traffic.

✓ Especially in the morning when you go to work and you are driving in traffic.

The phrase 'driving in the traffic' is incorrect; 'traffic' is an uncountable noun here and does not require 'the'. The correct phrase is 'driving in traffic'.

× Music makes so easy and just reliefs from the stress of the traffic.

✓ Music makes it so easy and just relieves the stress of traffic.

The sentence lacks an object after 'makes'. Adding 'it' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'reliefs' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'relieves'. 'The traffic' should be 'traffic' as it is uncountable here.

× Yes, in a secondary school we had in school critical music.

✓ Yes, in secondary school we had critical music classes.

The phrase 'had in school critical music' is awkward and incorrect. 'Had critical music classes' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'a secondary school' is better as 'secondary school' without 'a' when referring to the general education level.

× So I tried to learn how to sing, but just don't have the talent, unfortunately.

✓ So I tried to learn how to sing, but I just don't have the talent, unfortunately.

The subject 'I' is missing before 'just don't have'. It is necessary to include the subject for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But still I don't give up.

✓ But I still don't give up.

The adverb 'still' is better placed before the verb 'don't give up' for natural English word order.

× I think for myself, I think when I shower, I think for my kids.

✓ I think to myself, I think about my kids when I shower.

The phrase 'think for myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'think to myself'. Also, 'I think for my kids' is unclear; 'I think about my kids' is correct.

× Sometimes I sing for my kids, uh, it just brings so much good vibe and uh as well helps them to, to be entertained and spend time with them as well.

✓ Sometimes I sing for my kids; it just brings such a good vibe and also helps to entertain them and spend time with them.

'So much good vibe' should be 'such a good vibe'. The phrase 'helps them to, to be entertained' is awkward; 'helps to entertain them' is better. Also, avoid repeating 'as well' twice.

× I think for my husband.

✓ I think of my husband.

The correct preposition with 'think' when referring to someone is 'of', not 'for'.

× Yes, I think thinking brings happiness to people because in every wedding or religions we think so that means that singing brings people together and as well it helps to bring a joyful moments.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because at every wedding or religious event, singing brings people together and also helps to create joyful moments.

The original sentence misuses 'thinking' instead of 'singing'. 'In every wedding or religions' is incorrect; it should be 'at every wedding or religious event'. 'A joyful moments' is incorrect; 'joyful moments' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, 'as well' is better replaced with 'also' for smoother flow.