Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and natural, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your response concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing as a hobby because it relaxes me. Although I'm not a professional singer, I often sing in my free time, especially when I'm alone at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and informative, but you can improve coherence by using linking words like 'however' or 'also'. Try to avoid informal phrases like 'school times' and use more precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: No, I have never received professional singing training. However, during my school years, we had dedicated singing classes, and I also participated in group performances and various school events.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains a small grammatical error and could be more concise. Avoid redundancy and ensure correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my close family members and friends because singing is a way to express my love and appreciation for them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and clear, but you can improve it by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Also, try to provide a more specific example to make your point stronger.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can uplift people's mood. For instance, when someone feels down, singing a cheerful song for them can brighten their day and bring a smile to their face.

× Yes, I like singing but not professionally but as a hobby because I am not a very good singer.

✓ Yes, I like singing, not professionally but as a hobby because I am not a very good singer.

The sentence uses 'but' twice consecutively, which is incorrect conjunction use. The first 'but' should be replaced with a comma to improve sentence flow and clarity.

× But as a hobby I love to do it when I have free time or if I get a chance to sing in my bathroom.

✓ As a hobby, I love to do it when I have free time or if I get a chance to sing in my bathroom.

Starting a sentence with 'But' is generally informal and can be avoided in formal speech. Removing 'But' and adding a comma after 'hobby' improves sentence structure.

× No, I have never taken any professional training for singing, but during my school times we used to have a singing period.

✓ No, I have never taken any professional training for singing, but during my school days we used to have a singing period.

The phrase 'school times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'school days' when referring to the period of schooling in the past.

× Plus I have performed in different group songs and in different school activities.

✓ Plus, I have performed in different group songs and various school activities.

The phrase 'different group songs' is acceptable but 'different school activities' is better expressed as 'various school activities' for clarity and naturalness.

× I it is a way of my love being expressed to them.

✓ It is a way of expressing my love to them.

The original sentence has an extra pronoun 'I' causing sentence structure error. The corrected sentence removes the extra word and restructures for clarity.