Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中多次出现了发音错误（如'seeing'应为'singing'），且表达不够连贯，建议注意发音准确性，并且回答时尽量简洁明了，避免重复。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I find it hard to keep the rhythm. Also, I feel I am not very good at it, so I usually avoid singing.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的时态和句型，简洁明了地说明学习经历。

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned some basic singing skills in music classes during primary and junior school, but I never took professional lessons.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构混乱，建议使用连贯的句子并注意语法，表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my parents on their birthdays, usually a birthday song. Also, I might sing for my boyfriend to express my feelings and love.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但有发音错误和语法问题，建议注意发音准确性，使用完整句子表达观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to many people because it helps them express their emotions and relieve stress. However, I personally don't enjoy singing.

× Actually, I don't like seeing.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing.

这里'seeing'是动词'sing'的错误形式，应该用'singing'表示唱歌的动作。

× I'm very poor at seeing because I I just can't get the rhythm.

✓ I'm very poor at singing because I just can't get the rhythm.

同样，'seeing'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× I used to learning thing in music class, but just a very basic ones and I don't have any other professionals in classes.

✓ I used to learn things in music class, but just very basic ones and I didn't have any other professional classes.

'used to'后应接动词原形，不能用'learning'。此外，'thing'应为复数'things'，'professionals'应为形容词'professional'修饰'classes'。

× I used to learning thing in music class, but just a very basic ones and I don't have any other professionals in classes.

✓ I used to learn things in music class, but just very basic ones and I didn't have any other professional classes.

'thing'应为复数'things'，'ones'前不需要'a'，'professionals'应为形容词'professional'。

× I don't have any other professionals in classes.

✓ I didn't have any other professional classes.

描述过去的情况，应该用过去时'didn't have'。

× 2 For my one thing for maybe my parents when they when they are in their birthday I may sing birthday song and also maybe singing for my boyfriend.

✓ For one thing, maybe for my parents when it is their birthday, I may sing a birthday song and also maybe sing for my boyfriend.

'birthday'前应加冠词'the'或'it is their birthday'，'birthday song'前应加冠词'a'，'singing'应改为动词原形'sing'。

× That's a way to show my expression and show my love for him.

✓ That's a way to show my feelings and show my love to him.

'expression'用复数形式'feelings'更合适，'love for him'改为'love to him'更符合表达习惯。

× Yeah, yeah, of course for many people it's really a good way to show their expressions, like they can release their stress by seeing and also.

✓ Yeah, yeah, of course for many people it's really a good way to show their feelings, like they can release their stress by singing and so on.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'expressions'改为'feelings'更合适，句尾用'so on'更自然。

× But for me, it's not a happy thing to do.

✓ But for me, it's not a happy thing to do.

该句语法正确，无需修改。