Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如"seeing"应为"singing"，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my thoughts and feelings clearly to others.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构重复，表达略显啰嗦。建议使用更简洁的句式，并注意时态一致。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned singing because the lessons are quite expensive, and as a student, I can't afford them.

Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，句子结构复杂且不连贯。建议简化句子，明确表达想法，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ejemplo: I haven't thought about it before, but if I had the chance, I would like to sing for my parents because they are the most important people in my life.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构和用词稍显重复和不自然。建议使用更流畅的句式，并具体说明原因。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I believe singing can lift people's spirits because it allows them to express their emotions and feel happier.

× Yes, I really enjoy seeing for the reason that every time I sing I feel I can express what I imagine or what I think.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing for the reason that every time I sing I feel I can express what I imagine or what I think.

动词 enjoy 后面应接动名词形式，不能用动词原形或其他形式。这里应使用 'singing' 而不是 'seeing'。

× That is to say, I can express something I thought, think about and express it to another people.

✓ That is to say, I can express something I thought about, think about, and express it to other people.

动词短语 'think about' 需要完整表达，且 'another people' 用法错误，应为 'other people'。

× No, because in Taiwan our singing lessons are too expensive for me because I'm just a student now, so I didn't have too much money for me to afford this lesson.

✓ No, because in Taiwan our singing lessons are too expensive for me since I'm just a student now, so I don't have enough money to afford these lessons.

时态不一致，描述现在情况应使用现在时，'didn't have' 应改为 'don't have'。另外，'too much money for me to afford this lesson' 结构不自然，改为 'enough money to afford these lessons' 更合适。

× Well, I haven't thought about that before, but if I have an opportunity to sing for my parents, I would like to say it is a very meaningful to me because I want to sing from the most crucial role in my life and that was that.

✓ Well, I haven't thought about that before, but if I have an opportunity to sing for my parents, I would like to say it is very meaningful to me because I want to sing for the most crucial people in my life, and that is my parents.

'a very meaningful' 中 'meaningful' 是形容词，前面不需要冠词 'a'。'sing from the most crucial role' 结构错误，应为 'sing for the most crucial people'。句尾 'that was that' 不合适，改为 'that is my parents'。

× Absolutely. I really recommend people feel sad or disappointed they can start to sing because singing really can bring happiness to people.

✓ Absolutely. I really recommend that people who feel sad or disappointed start to sing because singing really can bring happiness to people.

动词 recommend 后应接从句，且缺少连接词 'that'，'people feel sad or disappointed' 应改为 'people who feel sad or disappointed'。