Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như lặp từ "I" và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it. Instead, I enjoy listening to music, especially songs by Charlie Puth.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "funny experience" (trải nghiệm vui nhộn) nên dùng "enjoyable experience" hoặc "memorable experience". Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu văn liên kết tốt hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. In my primary and secondary school, music was a compulsory subject, so every student had to learn how to sing. During that time, I learned many traditional Vietnamese student songs, and I really enjoyed that memorable experience.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như "I'll if my loved one require me to practising" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I am quite shy and feel nervous singing in front of anyone, even my parents. However, if my loved ones ask me to practice singing in the future, I will try to overcome my fears.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "its lyrics really touch my heart" nên là "its lyrics really touch my heart" và "overcome thick anything" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, I once heard a song by Coldplay whose lyrics touched my heart and encouraged me to overcome difficulties in life.

× I am not a kind of person that is good in singing.

✓ I am not the kind of person who is good at singing.

The phrase 'good in singing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' when referring to skills. Also, 'a kind of person that' should be 'the kind of person who' for proper relative clause usage.

× Like I am not singing like a bird.

✓ I am not singing like a bird.

The word 'Like' at the beginning is unnecessary and informal here; removing it improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× So instead of singing I I really love to listen to music and especially listen to Charlie Puth.

✓ So instead of singing, I really love to listen to music, especially Charlie Puth.

The repetition of 'I' is a typo and should be removed. Also, 'especially listen to Charlie Puth' is better expressed as 'especially Charlie Puth' for conciseness.

× Yeah, Charlie Puth products.

✓ Yeah, Charlie Puth's songs.

The word 'products' is incorrect in this context; 'songs' or 'music' is appropriate when referring to a singer's work.

× And during that time I learned many traditional Vietnamese student songs.

✓ And during that time, I learned many traditional Vietnamese student songs.

A comma after 'time' improves readability; the past tense 'learned' is correct here.

× And yeah, I really enjoyed that funny experience.

✓ And yeah, I really enjoyed that fun experience.

'Funny' means causing laughter, while 'fun' means enjoyable; 'fun experience' is the correct phrase here.

× Honestly I'm quite an introvert and shy person so I feel nervous singing in front of anyone even if they are my parents.

✓ Honestly, I'm quite an introverted and shy person, so I feel nervous singing in front of anyone, even if they are my parents.

Adding commas improves sentence clarity. 'Introvert' as a noun is correct, but 'introverted' as an adjective fits better here.

× However, in the near future I'll if my loved one require me to practising I'll try to break up my horizons and things.

✓ However, in the near future, if my loved one requires me to practice, I'll try to broaden my horizons and things.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'I'll if' is incorrect; it should be 'if'. 'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular 'loved one'. 'Practising' should be 'practice' as a verb here. 'Break up my horizons' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'broaden my horizons'.

× For example, I've heard a song from Coldplay, its name is something just like this and it's lyrics really touch my heart and encourage me to overcome thick anything in my life.

✓ For example, I've heard a song from Coldplay; its name is something like this, and its lyrics really touch my heart and encourage me to overcome anything difficult in my life.

'It's lyrics' should be 'its lyrics' (possessive pronoun). 'Something just like this' is better as 'something like this'. 'Thick anything' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'anything difficult' or 'any difficulties'.

× And it is like life is just a try.

✓ And it is like life is just a trial.

'Try' as a noun is uncommon here; 'trial' or 'test' is more appropriate to express life's challenges.