Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc cá nhân, nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên tránh dùng các cụm từ như "I don't know the exact reason" và cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Although my voice isn't perfect, singing makes me feel happy and calm.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ như "and and". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác như "I don't have talented". Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing before. I did take dance lessons, but dancing isn't really my strength.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ như "in in". Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn, đồng thời tránh dùng các cụm từ không tự nhiên như "a lot of time". Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually sing for my friends because I feel shy singing in front of my family. However, I am confident when I sing with my friends, and they often listen to me.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "love to singing" nên là "love singing" và câu "because help me to relax a lot" thiếu chủ ngữ. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Definitely, singing brings happiness to many people. For example, Filipino people love singing because it makes them feel joyful. Personally, I enjoy singing especially when I am stressed because it helps me relax.

× Definitely, I don't know the exact reason, although I don't have a really good voice, but I really love singing.

✓ Definitely, I don't know the exact reason. Although I don't have a really good voice, I really love singing.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'although' and 'but' together, which is redundant. Use either 'although' or 'but' to connect clauses, not both.

× Not really, I haven't in the past.

✓ Not really, I haven't learned in the past.

The sentence is incomplete; 'haven't' requires a past participle verb to complete the meaning. 'Learned' is the correct past participle here.

× I did learn how to dance but saying it's not my cup of tea and and so I don't have talented on that subject.

✓ I did learn how to dance but I would say it's not my cup of tea, and so I am not talented in that subject.

The phrase 'saying it's not my cup of tea' is incorrect; it should be 'I would say'. Also, 'have talented on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'am not talented in'.

× I often sing for my friends.

✓ I often sing for my friends.

No correction needed; the sentence correctly uses plural 'friends' with the verb.

× It's kind of weird because I don't like to sing in front of my families because I kind of scared and get shy.

✓ It's kind of weird because I don't like to sing in front of my family because I am kind of scared and get shy.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, 'I kind of scared' is missing the verb 'am'.

× I don't know why but in in front of my friends I'm really confident and they often hear me singing a lot of time.

✓ I don't know why but in front of my friends I'm really confident and they often hear me singing a lot of times.

The phrase 'a lot of time' should be 'a lot of times' to indicate frequency. Also, remove the repeated 'in'.

× Definitely, you can see that through the Filipino people, they love to singing and yeah, just they feel really happy when they sing.

✓ Definitely, you can see that through the Filipino people; they love to sing and yeah, they just feel really happy when they sing.

The verb 'love to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'love to sing'. The infinitive form 'to sing' is correct after 'love to'.

× And for me, of course, I really love singing, especially when I get stressed because help me to relax a lot.

✓ And for me, of course, I really love singing, especially when I get stressed because it helps me to relax a lot.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'helps'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.