Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сіздің жауабыңыз табиғи және шынайы, бірақ сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді дұрыс қолдану қажет. Мысалы, 'that's really enjoying enjoyable hobby' деген тіркесті 'it's a really enjoyable hobby' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді қысқа және нақты етіп құрастырыңыз.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it is a really enjoyable hobby when I am alone at home. However, I feel shy and cannot sing in public.

Sugerencia: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдер түсініксіз. Мысалы, 'I just think myself' деген дұрыс емес. Оның орнына 'I just sing by myself' деп айту керек. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді логикалық түрде байланыстыру үшін 'and' немесе 'so' сияқты байланыс сөздерін қолданыңыз.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learnt how to sing. I just sing by myself for fun when I am alone, and I am not interested in singing in public or attending special courses.

Sugerencia: Жауабыңызда сөздерді дұрыс қолдану және сөйлем құрылымын жақсарту қажет. Мысалы, 'enjoying just seeing myself' деген тіркесті түсініксіз. Оның орнына 'I just sing for myself because it is very relaxing' деп айтуға болады. Сонымен қатар, қайталауларды азайтыңыз.

Ejemplo: I don't sing for anyone else; I just sing for myself because it is very relaxing.

Sugerencia: Жауабыңызда қайталанулар көп және сөйлемдер күрделі әрі түсініксіз. Мысалы, 'I think, I think everyone, just everyone in the world thinks' дегенді қысқарту керек. Сөйлемдерді қарапайым және нақты етіп құрастырыңыз, сондай-ақ байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because many, like me, enjoy singing alone even if they are shy to sing in public. Singing helps people feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I do like singing but when I'm alone at home or in my room that's really enjoying enjoyable hobby.

✓ Yes, I do like singing but when I'm alone at home or in my room, that's a really enjoyable hobby.

The word 'enjoying' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; the correct adjective form is 'enjoyable' to describe the hobby. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'really enjoyable hobby' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× But in public I couldn't.

✓ But in public, I couldn't.

A comma is needed after 'But in public' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× I can't it's I'm so shy.

✓ I can't because I'm so shy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Using 'because' connects the two ideas properly, making the sentence complete and understandable.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past participles, but 'learned' is more common in American English. Since the rest of the transcript uses American English conventions, 'learned' is preferred here.

× No I haven't, I just think myself just for fun in my room or when I'm alone.

✓ No, I haven't. I just sing to myself for fun in my room or when I'm alone.

The phrase 'think myself' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'sing to myself.' Also, the sentence was a run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× But I'm never interested in singing in public or go to the special courses.

✓ But I'm never interested in singing in public or going to special courses.

Parallel structure requires both verbs after 'interested in' to be in the gerund form ('singing' and 'going'). Also, 'the special courses' should be 'special courses' unless referring to specific courses.

× I'm not singing for someone, I just sing for myself and enjoying just seeing myself.

✓ I'm not singing for someone; I just sing for myself and enjoy just seeing myself.

The verb 'enjoying' should be in the base form 'enjoy' to match the auxiliary verb 'do' implied in the sentence. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× It's really relaxing, relaxing thing.

✓ It's really a relaxing thing.

The repetition of 'relaxing' is unnecessary. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'relaxing thing' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because I think, I think everyone, just everyone in the world thinks when they're alone, who shies like me singing in the public and they're just singing for themselves.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because I think everyone, just everyone in the world, thinks that when they're alone, people who are shy like me sing in public and they're just singing for themselves.

The sentence was confusing and had incorrect pronoun and verb forms. 'Who shies like me singing' is incorrect; it should be 'people who are shy like me sing.' Also, 'in the public' should be 'in public.' The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And everyone love it and I love it too.

✓ And everyone loves it and I love it too.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'loves' with an 's' to agree in number.