Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your opinion and giving a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and incorrect grammar, such as 'to listening' instead of 'listening to'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I love listening to Taylor Swift's songs. Her music is easy to follow, which inspires me to sing along.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with correct grammar and avoid repeating the same phrase. Also, clarify your point about natural talent more smoothly.

Ejemplo: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I believe I have a natural talent for singing.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but includes filler words and some awkward phrasing. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, use singular or plural consistently (boyfriend vs. boyfriends).

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my boyfriend because I enjoy the romantic feeling it creates. Singing love songs for someone special feels very meaningful to me.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to organize your response logically using linking words and correct grammar. Be specific about your experience and how it relates to happiness.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. For example, when I attended a Blackpink concert, I saw many people around me smiling and enjoying the music, which showed how singing can uplift people's moods.

× I really like the singing because I love to listening to Taylor Swift song, so her music is making me really love to sing because it's easy listening, yeah.

✓ I really like singing because I love listening to Taylor Swift songs, so her music makes me really love to sing because it's easy to listen to, yeah.

The phrase 'love to listening' is incorrect; after 'love' we use either the infinitive 'to listen' or the gerund 'listening' but not both together. Also, 'the singing' should be 'singing' without 'the' because it refers to the activity in general. 'Taylor Swift song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context. 'Her music is making me really love to sing' is better as 'her music makes me really love to sing' for natural present tense usage. 'Easy listening' is a noun phrase; to express that the music is easy to listen to, use 'easy to listen to.'

× I never been learn how to sing a song, but I guess I just have natural talents to sing a song, sing a, you know, to sing a song, I mean.

✓ I have never learned how to sing a song, but I guess I just have natural talent to sing a song, you know, I mean.

The phrase 'I never been learn' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'I have never learned.' 'Natural talents' should be singular 'natural talent' when referring to an uncountable ability. The repeated phrases 'sing a, you know, to sing a song' are redundant and can be simplified for clarity.

× I really like, you know, the romantic feeling and I think when I sing a song for someone, it's very romantic for me, especially when I sing the song that like the love song.

✓ I really like, you know, the romantic feeling and I think when I sing a song for someone, it's very romantic for me, especially when I sing a love song.

The phrase 'the song that like the love song' is awkward and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'a love song' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'the romantic feeling' is acceptable but could be more natural without 'the' depending on context.

× I've been in the black pink. I've been in a Blackpink concert one one day and I saw people around me are so happy.

✓ I've been to Blackpink. I've been to a Blackpink concert one day and I saw people around me were so happy.

The phrase 'I've been in the black pink' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to attending a concert or event. 'One one day' is likely a mistake and should be 'one day.' Also, 'people around me are so happy' should be in past tense 'were so happy' to match the past event.

× And when I get up from the stadium, stadium, I saw a lot of people around the stadium is also being happy because they can listen to.

✓ And when I got up from the stadium, I saw a lot of people around the stadium were also happy because they could listen to the music.

The phrase 'get up from the stadium' should be past tense 'got up' to match the past event. 'People around the stadium is also being happy' has subject-verb agreement and tense errors; it should be 'people... were also happy.' The sentence ends abruptly with 'because they can listen to' which is incomplete; it should specify 'the music' or similar. Also, 'being happy' is awkward here; simple past 'were happy' is better.