Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say directly that you enjoy singing because it makes you happy and you often sing along when you listen to music. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'mouth music system'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy. Whenever I listen to music, I like to sing along even though I am not a professional singer.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. Explain that you have not learned singing formally because of family reasons and lack of interest, but you enjoy other extracurricular activities. Use correct sentence structure and linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing formally because my family is quite conservative. Also, I was not very interested in singing lessons, but I enjoyed participating in other extracurricular activities.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. You can say that you like singing for yourself because you do not have a special person to sing for. Keep your sentences simple and coherent.

Ejemplo: I usually sing for myself because I don't have a special person to sing for. Singing makes me feel good when I listen to music.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good intention but is not clear and has grammatical errors. Try to say that singing can bring happiness because it improves mood and relaxes the mind. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely think singing can bring happiness to people. When I listen to music and sing, I feel better and my mind becomes relaxed.

× I love to listening song.

✓ I love listening to songs.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'listening' not the infinitive 'to listening'. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to indicate general liking. The correct structure is 'love listening to songs'.

× No, I didn't learn how to sing because my family is very conservative and also I am also a very not interested about learn sing singing but I like suppose reading extra curriculum activities and I did it everywhere.

✓ No, I didn't learn how to sing because my family is very conservative and also I am not very interested in learning to sing, but I like doing extracurricular activities and I did them everywhere.

The phrase 'very not interested about learn sing singing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'not very interested in learning to sing'. Also, 'extra curriculum activities' should be 'extracurricular activities', and 'did it' should be 'did them' to refer to activities. The verb forms and prepositions are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Dope force singing a song that need a loved one person for but I have no any lovely person in my life so.

✓ I want to sing a song for a loved one, but I don't have any loved ones in my life.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. 'Dope force' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and structure to express the intended meaning.

× But I like singing for my own and when I'm listening music I like to.

✓ But I like singing for myself, and when I'm listening to music, I like to sing too.

'For my own' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun. Also, 'listening music' should be 'listening to music'. The sentence is completed with 'I like to sing too' for clarity.

× Yes I will absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

The phrase 'I will absolutely' is incomplete and incorrect here. The modal verb 'will' is unnecessary. The correct response is simply 'Yes, absolutely.'

× Singing is being happiness in a person's life and as I said, I love to learn listen music and when I listen music I I feel better in and also my mind flashes and then I can.

✓ Singing brings happiness to a person's life, and as I said, I love listening to music. When I listen to music, I feel better, and my mind becomes clear.

'Singing is being happiness' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'Singing brings happiness'. 'Learn listen music' should be 'listening to music'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'My mind flashes' is unclear; 'my mind becomes clear' is a better expression.