Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
I don't really enjoy singing because my singing skills are quite poor. For instance, when I go to Katy Perry with my friends, I often feel embarrassed since I don't know many songs.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
Oh no, I have never been to sing because I think my singing skills are quite poor. I've never taken anything lessons. I feel a bit self-conscious about my voice.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I want to sing for my parents, especially my mom because she always supports me and done so much for me since I was child. Uh, singing for her is a way to ex express my gratitude and reply kindness.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Oh definitely. I believe seeing can bring me a lot of happiness because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel more positive and energetic.
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“when I go to Katy Perry”应为“when I go to karaoke”。建议使用更准确的词汇,并避免重复表达“singing skills are quite poor”。
Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy singing because I am not very good at it. For example, when I go to karaoke with my friends, I often feel embarrassed because I don't know many songs.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误,如“have never been to sing”应为“have never learned to sing”,以及“never taken anything lessons”应为“never taken any lessons”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
Ejemplo: No, I have never learned to sing because I think my singing skills are quite poor. I have never taken any singing lessons and I feel a bit self-conscious about my voice.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了感情,但存在语法错误,如“done so much”应为“has done so much”,“since I was child”应为“since I was a child”,以及“ex express”应为“express”。建议注意时态和拼写。
Ejemplo: I want to sing for my parents, especially my mom, because she has always supported me and has done so much for me since I was a child. Singing for her is a way to express my gratitude and repay her kindness.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答内容积极,但有拼写错误,如“seeing”应为“singing”。建议注意拼写和表达的准确性,同时可以增加更多具体细节。
Ejemplo: Oh definitely. I believe singing can bring me a lot of happiness because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel more positive and energetic.
× Oh no, I have never been to sing because I think my singing skills are quite poor.
✓ Oh no, I have never learned to sing because I think my singing skills are quite poor.
这里使用了错误的动词短语“been to sing”,正确表达应该是“learned to sing”,表示“学唱歌”。“been to”通常用于表示去过某地,而不是学习某技能。
× I've never taken anything lessons.
✓ I've never taken any lessons.
“anything lessons”是不正确的搭配,应该用“any lessons”表示“任何课程”。此外,“taken any lessons”是正确的过去分词短语,表示“参加过课程”。
× she always supports me and done so much for me since I was child.
✓ she always supports me and has done so much for me since I was a child.
“done”缺少助动词“has”,正确的现在完成时是“has done”。另外,“since I was child”缺少冠词“a”,应为“since I was a child”。
× Uh, singing for her is a way to ex express my gratitude and reply kindness.
✓ Uh, singing for her is a way to express my gratitude and repay kindness.
“ex express”是重复错误,应为“express”。“reply kindness”用词错误,正确表达是“repay kindness”,表示“回报善意”。
× I believe seeing can bring me a lot of happiness because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
✓ I believe singing can bring me a lot of happiness because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
“seeing”是错误的词,应该是“singing”,因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。
× when I go to Katy Perry with my friends, I often feel embarrassed since I don't know many songs.
✓ when I go to karaoke with my friends, I often feel embarrassed since I don't know many songs.
“go to Katy Perry”是错误表达,应该是“go to karaoke”,表示去卡拉OK唱歌。