Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve doğal olmayan ifadeler var. "I don't like because" yerine "I don't like singing because" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "when I singing" yerine "when I sing" kullanmalısınız. Daha akıcı ve doğal cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I lack confidence in my voice and feel very shy when I sing in front of crowds.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. "I had a chance during my childhood at school" ifadesi daha açık olmalı. Ayrıca, "some other arts" yerine "other forms of art" demek daha doğru olur. Cümlelerinizi daha net ve akıcı yapmaya çalışın.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing, although I had the opportunity to try it at school during my childhood. However, I prefer to engage in other forms of art.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz çok uzun ve karmaşık, ayrıca dilbilgisi hataları var. "4 special one" ifadesi yerine "four special people" demelisiniz. "Towards to the people who is" yerine "to the people who are" kullanmalısınız. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlaşılır yapın.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for four special people in my life because I want to express my feelings to those who are very important to me. It makes me happy, and I believe it makes them happy too.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde anlam bozuklukları ve yanlış kelime kullanımları var. "bring weapons to people" ifadesi yanlış, doğru ifade "bring happiness to people" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz tamamlanmamış ve karışık. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurmaya özen gösterin.

Ejemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. If you listen to cheerful songs, you can feel happy. However, if you listen to sad songs, you might feel unhappy depending on your mood.

× I feel very shy when I singing in front of crowds.

✓ I feel very shy when I sing in front of crowds.

The verb after 'when I' should be in the base form for present tense, not the '-ing' form. Use 'sing' instead of 'singing' here.

× I have never learned how to sing, but I had a chance during my childhood at school.

✓ I have never learned how to sing, but I had a chance during my childhood at school.

This sentence is correct in tense usage; no correction needed.

× But I prefer to do something some other arts.

✓ But I prefer to do some other arts.

The phrase 'something some other arts' is incorrect. 'Some other arts' is the correct quantifier usage here.

× I would like to sing 4 special one who is in my life because I really like to express my feelings towards to the people who is really important for me in my life and I feel very happy also it makes him happy.

✓ I would like to sing for four special people who are in my life because I really like to express my feelings towards the people who are really important to me in my life, and I feel very happy; also, it makes them happy.

Use 'sing for' to indicate the audience. '4' should be spelled out as 'four' in formal speech. 'One' should be plural 'people' to match 'four'. 'Who is' should be 'who are' for plural. 'Towards to' is incorrect; use 'towards'. 'Important for me' should be 'important to me'. 'Him' should be 'them' to match plural.

× Of course it can bring weapons to people, but if you think you're really cheerful songs you can feel happy about.

✓ Of course it can bring happiness to people, but if you think about really cheerful songs, you can feel happy.

'Weapons' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'happiness'. Also, 'think you're really cheerful songs' is incorrect; it should be 'think about really cheerful songs'.

× If you think depressive and sad songs, you may feel yourself unhappy.

✓ If you think about depressive and sad songs, you may feel unhappy.

The verb 'think' requires the preposition 'about' before the object. 'Feel yourself unhappy' is incorrect; 'feel unhappy' is correct.

× Maybe your mood is the.

✓ Maybe your mood changes.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning, such as 'Maybe your mood changes.'