Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当。建议简化句子结构，避免使用不准确的词汇，如“torn deaf”，并且注意句子连贯性。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I find it hard to control my pitch, and I feel uncomfortable when I hear myself sing.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“improve my work skills”和“teacher that I should give up”。建议使用更准确的表达，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. When I was 10 years old, I took singing lessons, but my teacher said I wasn't very suitable for singing and suggested I should give up.

Sugerencia: 回答中出现了不恰当的词汇“white”，且句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议使用正确的词汇，简洁明了地表达害羞和紧张的原因。

Ejemplo: I don't want to sing for anyone because I am shy and feel nervous performing in front of people. I'm afraid of showing my weaknesses in public.

Sugerencia: 回答中有很多拼写和用词错误，如“St. sons”、“live their morals and murders”，导致意思不清。建议使用简单准确的词汇，表达唱歌带来快乐和放松的观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. Many songs have relaxing melodies that can help people feel happy and reduce stress.

× No, I don't like things because I am torn deaf and I think it's so difficult for me to control my pitch and, you know, make me feel uncomfortable when I listen to myself sing.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I am tone deaf and I think it's so difficult for me to control my pitch and, you know, it makes me feel uncomfortable when I listen to myself sing.

这里'torn deaf'是错误的表达，正确的说法是'tone deaf'，表示音盲。'things'用在这里不合适，应改为'singing'。此外，'make me feel uncomfortable'前应加主语'it'。

× Yes I have. When I was 10 years old I found a teacher to improve my work skills, but the teacher told me I was not very suitable for singing and teacher that I should give up.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was 10 years old, I found a teacher to improve my singing skills, but the teacher told me I was not very suitable for singing and told me that I should give up.

'work skills'应改为'singing skills'，更符合语境。'teacher that I should give up'缺少动词，应改为'told me that I should give up'。

× I don't want to sing for any white because I am shy and it makes me feel nervous that I need to perform in front of the public and actually I am afraid of showing my shortcomings in the public.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone because I am shy and it makes me feel nervous to perform in front of the public and actually I am afraid of showing my shortcomings in public.

'any white'是错误的表达，应改为'anyone'表示任何人。'in the public'应改为'in public'，因为'public'作为副词时不加冠词。

× It made me feel it.

✓ It makes me feel that way.

'It made me feel it'表达不清，缺少具体指代，应改为'It makes me feel that way'，更准确表达感受。

× Yes, of course umm because many St. sons have relaxing melodies and it can help people to live their morals and murders and make their brains active.

✓ Yes, of course, umm, because many songs have relaxing melodies and they can help people to relieve their stress and make their brains active.

'St. sons'应为'songs'。'live their morals and murders'是错误表达，应为'relieve their stress'。'it'应改为'they'，指代复数'songs'。