Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "the stress of the healthy day" and "the her stress". Try to use simpler and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas more smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and forget the stress from my daily life and work. Singing is my passion and it makes me feel peaceful and calm.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear, especially the last part. Try to complete your sentences and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition like "sing sing".

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have taught myself by practicing and watching YouTube videos. I used to sing pop songs, but now I prefer other styles.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some hesitation and minor grammar mistakes like "prefer to dedicated". Try to speak more confidently and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid filler words like "umm" and "uh".

Ejemplo: Actually, I don't want to dedicate my songs to anyone else. I prefer to sing for myself because when I feel good, my whole day becomes better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like "Is deeper people or it depends on the person Twice." Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I think singing can bring happiness to many people, but it depends on the individual. For me, singing brings a lot of joy and helps me relieve stress quickly.

× Yes, I do like singing because it helps me get away from the stress of the healthy day and also overcome the her stress of my personal and work life.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because it helps me get away from the stress of a healthy day and also overcome the stress of my personal and work life.

The phrase 'the healthy day' is incorrect because 'healthy' is an adjective that does not fit here; it should be 'a healthy day' to indicate any healthy day. Also, 'the her stress' is incorrect; 'her' is a possessive pronoun and should not be used with 'the'. The correct phrase is 'the stress of my personal and work life.' This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I haven't even learned how to sing a song but I have learned from practicing myself and watching YouTube videos and I used to sing sing a pop song but nowadays I prefer.

✓ No, I haven't even learned how to sing a song but I have learned by practicing myself and watching YouTube videos. I used to sing pop songs but nowadays I prefer not to.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Learned from practicing' should be 'learned by practicing' to indicate the method. The phrase 'I used to sing sing a pop song' has a repeated word and should be 'I used to sing pop songs.' The sentence ends abruptly with 'but nowadays I prefer,' which is incomplete; adding 'not to' completes the thought. These corrections improve tense consistency and sentence completeness.

× Actually, I don't want to dedicate my song to anyone, umm, but I prefer to dedicated to uh myself.

✓ Actually, I don't want to dedicate my song to anyone, umm, but I prefer to dedicate it to myself.

The verb 'dedicated' is the past tense form, but here the infinitive 'to dedicate' is needed after 'prefer to.' Also, 'to myself' should be preceded by the object 'it' referring to 'my song.' This correction fixes verb form and sentence structure errors.

× Is deeper people or it depends on the person Twice.

✓ It depends on the person.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and extra words. 'Is deeper people or it depends on the person Twice' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. Simplifying to 'It depends on the person' conveys the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× Singing is also passion for me that I can get rid of any tensions immediately after singing a song.

✓ Singing is also a passion for me that helps me get rid of any tension immediately after singing a song.

The phrase 'Singing is also passion for me' lacks the article 'a' before 'passion.' Also, 'that I can get rid of any tensions' is awkward; 'that helps me get rid of any tension' is clearer and grammatically correct. 'Tensions' is better singular here as 'tension' is uncountable in this context. These corrections improve article usage and sentence clarity.