Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro ar confusing. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shohoje ar shothik vabe bolte, jate shuney clear bujha jai. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because', 'however' bhalo coherence er jonno. Ar apnar opinion shoho specific example dite paren.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I am a religious Muslim and in Islam, music is considered Haram. However, I enjoy listening to Nasheed and many Doha from the Quran, which bring peace to my heart.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu repetition ache ar kichu grammar mistake. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shohoje ar shothik vabe bolte. Apni linking word use korte paren jemon 'instead' bhalo coherence er jonno. Apni kichu specific detail dite paren jemon kobe ar kibhabe Quran pora shikhechen.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learnt singing. Instead, I learnt how to read the Quran, which is mandatory in Islam. My mother taught me to read the Quran when I was a child.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ar sentence structure bhalo na. Apni chesta korun proshner shathe shothik vabe answer dite, ar sentence gulo shohoje ar shothik vabe bolte. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because', 'so' coherence er jonno. Apni specific karon dite paren keno apni gaan gaite chan na.

Ejemplo: I don't want to sing because I prefer to read the Quran every morning. Reading the Quran gives me calmness, so I read it regularly instead of singing.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar mistake ar sentence onek boro ar confusing. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shohoje ar shothik vabe bolte. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'but', 'however' coherence er jonno. Apni kichu specific opinion dite paren keno kichu manush gaan theke happiness pay.

Ejemplo: Maybe singing can bring happiness to some people who like music. However, I don't like music, so I don't know how it feels.

× No I don't like music because I am a religious person and is Muslim God.

✓ No, I don't like music because I am a religious person and a Muslim.

The phrase 'and is Muslim God' is incorrect and confusing. The correct pronoun and noun usage is 'and a Muslim' to indicate the speaker's religion. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is' and 'God' which do not fit here.

× so that I don't like to singing music.

✓ so I don't like singing music.

The phrase 'to singing' is incorrect. After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'so that' is misused here; 'so' is appropriate to show cause and effect.

× However I enjoy listening to Nasheed and so many Doha from Quran that fills my heart so cool calm so that I don't like.

✓ However, I enjoy listening to Nasheed and many Duas from the Quran that fill my heart with calmness, so I like them.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'so many Doha' should be 'many Duas'; 'from Quran' should be 'from the Quran'; 'that fills' should be 'that fill' to agree with plural subject; 'so cool calm' is incorrect and replaced with 'with calmness'; 'so that I don't like' contradicts the previous statement and is corrected to 'so I like them'. Also, commas and conjunctions are corrected for clarity.

× No, I don't learn music.

✓ No, I didn't learn music.

The question is about past experience, so the past tense 'didn't learn' is appropriate instead of present tense 'don't learn'.

× I don't learn singing.

✓ I didn't learn singing.

Same as above, past tense is required to indicate past learning experience.

× Instead I learn how to read Quran.

✓ Instead, I learned how to read the Quran.

Past tense 'learned' is needed here. Also, 'the Quran' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Quran is mandatory in Islam.

✓ The Quran is mandatory in Islam.

'Quran' is a specific book and requires the definite article 'the'.

× Quran learning is mandatory in Islam so that in my childhood my mother learned me how to read Quran.

✓ Learning the Quran is mandatory in Islam, so in my childhood my mother taught me how to read the Quran.

'Learned me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'taught me'. Also, 'Quran learning' is better expressed as 'Learning the Quran'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Quran'.

× I don't want to sing because in previously I said that I learn Quran in my childhood and I prefer to read Quran everyday in morning.

✓ I don't want to sing because, as I said before, I learned the Quran in my childhood and I prefer to read the Quran every morning.

'In previously' is incorrect; 'as I said before' is better. 'Learn' should be past tense 'learned'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). 'In morning' should be 'every morning'. Definite article 'the' is needed before 'Quran'.

× Quran gives my heart calmness so that I read Quran regularly.

✓ The Quran gives my heart calmness, so I read the Quran regularly.

Definite article 'the' is needed before 'Quran'. 'So that' is misused; 'so' is appropriate here.

× Don't I don't wanna sing.

✓ So, I don't want to sing.

'Don't I don't' is incorrect and redundant. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred in formal speech.

× Maybe singing can bring happiness, but to to some people those are like to listen music, but I don't like music so that I don't know how it feels actually.

✓ Maybe singing can bring happiness, but for some people who like to listen to music. I don't like music, so I don't know how it actually feels.

'To to' is a typo. 'Those are like to listen music' is incorrect; corrected to 'for some people who like to listen to music'. 'Listen music' should be 'listen to music'. 'So that' is misused; 'so' is appropriate. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.