Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repeating words like 'singing' and 'song' unnecessarily. Try to form complete sentences with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, explain why singing is your passion and when you usually sing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing because it is a form of passion for me. People sing for various reasons, and I usually sing whenever I am in a good mood.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Use proper sentence structure and avoid repeating words. Explain clearly that you have not taken formal lessons because singing comes naturally to you. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing formally because singing comes naturally to me. Whenever I listen to songs, I try to sing along without any training.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly who you want to sing for, and explain your feelings about singing. Use linking words and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, clarify what you mean by 'sing song for remix'.

Ejemplo: I enjoy singing for myself without any specific purpose. Sometimes, when I am in the mood, I like to sing songs, especially remixes.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is incomplete. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to everyone. When people sing, it improves their mood and helps them relax. For example, I love to sing songs to relieve stress.

× Singing is a types of passion and people usually sing song for many kind of reason.

✓ Singing is a type of passion and people usually sing songs for many kinds of reasons.

The word 'types' should be singular 'type' because it refers to one category here. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' because people sing multiple songs. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' and 'reason' should be plural 'reasons' to match the plural context.

× I usually sing song for whenever I'm in a mood.

✓ I usually sing songs whenever I'm in the mood.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary before 'whenever'. Also, 'in a mood' should be 'in the mood' as it refers to a specific state.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I haven't.

The verb 'have' needs an auxiliary verb to form the negative present perfect. 'I don't have' is incomplete here; 'I haven't' (short for 'I have not') is correct.

× I didn't learn how because it comes naturally and I naturally sing song, sing, sing a song whenever I listen some songs.

✓ I didn't learn how because it comes naturally and I naturally sing songs whenever I listen to some songs.

The phrase 'listen some songs' requires the preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Also, 'sing song, sing, sing a song' is redundant; simplified to 'sing songs'.

× I naturally sing song, sing, sing a song whenever I listen some songs.

✓ I naturally sing songs whenever I listen to some songs.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Also, 'sing song, sing, sing a song' is repetitive and should be simplified.

× I love to sing song there there's no purpose for it.

✓ I love to sing songs even when there's no purpose for it.

The phrase 'sing song there' is unclear and incorrect. 'Sing songs' is plural and 'even when' clarifies the meaning better.

× If I if I'm in mood there's times I really love to sing song otherwise it don't and usually I sing song for remix.

✓ If I'm in the mood, there are times I really love to sing songs; otherwise, I don't, and usually I sing songs for remixes.

'In mood' should be 'in the mood'. 'There's times' should be 'there are times' because 'times' is plural. 'Sing song' should be 'sing songs'. 'Don't' needs a subject 'I don't'. 'Remix' should be plural 'remixes'.

× Yes, it brings happiness for everyone.

✓ Yes, it brings happiness to everyone.

The correct preposition with 'bring happiness' is 'to', not 'for'.

× Everyone who sing song that can give gives a good mood and in this way they can be relaxed for for my care in in my care.

✓ Everyone who sings songs can give a good mood, and in this way, they can be relaxed. In my case, I love to sing songs to get rid of stress.

'Everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'sings' (third person singular). 'Sing song' should be 'sing songs'. The phrase 'for for my care in in my care' is unclear and likely a mistake; replaced with a clearer expression.