Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“singing gives me a chance to express my emotions, feelings”中“emotions”和“feelings”意义重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions. For example, when I sing English songs by Taylor Swift, I feel powerful and energetic.

Sugerencia: 回答应更直接，避免使用犹豫词如“umm”，并且句子结构应更清晰。可以用连接词来表达转折，使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I took some music lessons in secondary school. However, I don't think I learned much from those classes.

Sugerencia: 回答应避免语句不完整和犹豫词，表达要完整且连贯。建议使用连接词来组织句子，使表达更清晰。

Ejemplo: I usually want to sing for myself because, as an introverted person, singing boosts my confidence. Moreover, listening to the lyrics encourages me to never give up.

Sugerencia: 回答应避免重复和语法错误，使用连接词使句子更连贯。建议具体说明不同歌曲如何影响情绪。

Ejemplo: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the song. For example, positive songs like Taylor Swift's love stories can uplift people's mood, while sad songs might have the opposite effect.

× Yes, I like singing because singing gives me a chance to express my emotions, feelings and like for example, when I sing English songs especially like by Taylor Swift, I think it's really makes everyone so powerful and energetic.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing gives me a chance to express my emotions and feelings. For example, when I sing English songs, especially those by Taylor Swift, I think it really makes everyone feel powerful and energetic.

原句中“like for example”用法不当，应拆分为独立句子“for example”。此外，“it's really makes”中“makes”与主语不一致，应去掉“it's”或改为“it really makes”。建议将句子拆分，避免语法混乱。

× Not really, but before like in my secondary school we have some music lessons which the teacher would teach us, but I think it's not quite umm, maybe really learned something from her lesson.

✓ Not really, but before, like in my secondary school, we had some music lessons which the teacher taught us, but I think I didn't really learn much from her lessons.

句中“we have”应使用过去时“we had”，因为描述的是过去的经历；“would teach”改为过去式“taught”更符合语境；“maybe really learned”表达不清，应改为“didn't really learn much”。

× Maybe I always want to sing for myself because as an introverted person, I think singing can boost my confidence and I think it can deliver a message to myself that umm never give up by hearing the songs and the lyrics and also give my.

✓ Maybe I always want to sing for myself because, as an introverted person, I think singing can boost my confidence and deliver a message to myself to never give up by hearing the songs and the lyrics.

原句中“give my”不完整，缺少宾语，且“deliver a message to myself that umm never give up”表达不完整，应改为“deliver a message to myself to never give up”。此外，句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× I think it depends because like some singing some songs there are in some positive mood however some are in some negative mood.

✓ I think it depends because some songs are in a positive mood, however, some are in a negative mood.

原句中“like some singing some songs”结构混乱，应去掉“like some singing”；“there are in some positive mood”中“there are”用法错误，应直接说“some songs are in a positive mood”；“some positive mood”前应加冠词“a”。

× So I think it depends on what the people are singing. Like for Taylor Swift songs like the love stories.

✓ So I think it depends on what people are singing, like Taylor Swift's songs such as "Love Story."

原句中“the people”不需要定冠词，改为“people”；“Like for Taylor Swift songs like the love stories”表达重复且不规范，应改为“like Taylor Swift's songs such as 'Love Story'”。