Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ phù hợp. Nên chia câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because I am a musician and music is a big part of my life. I like to sing along with the melody when a song starts because it helps me connect with the feeling of the music.

Sugerencia: Cần sử dụng thì đúng và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc, có liên kết giữa các phần trong câu.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't want to become a professional singer. However, I often try to sing like the singers when I listen to their songs.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ phù hợp. Nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I don't like singing in front of many people. But if I had to sing for someone, it would be my mother because I feel comfortable with her and I want her to hear me.

Sugerencia: Cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Nên dùng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because melodies can lift our mood and help relieve stress. Singing gives us energy and helps us relax in many ways.

× I always sings with the melody when the song is start so I want to like feeling with it.

✓ I always sing with the melody when the song starts, so I want to feel like that with it.

The verb 'sings' should be 'sing' because the subject 'I' requires the base form without 's'. Also, 'is start' is incorrect; it should be 'starts' to agree with the singular subject 'song'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue in the present tense.

× I don't learn how to sing because I don't want to be a singer, but I usually sing try try myself to sing like a singer when I listen to this song.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing because I don't want to be a singer, but I usually try to sing like a singer when I listen to a song.

The phrase 'don't learn' is incorrect for past experience; 'haven't learned' is appropriate. Also, 'sing try try myself' is ungrammatical; it should be 'try to sing'. The verb tense and structure need correction to express past experience and habitual action properly.

× Honestly I don't want to like sing in front of everyone, but if I need to sing in front of the person I think would be my Mama because the embarrassing no and I really want her to listen.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to sing in front of everyone, but if I need to sing in front of someone, I think it would be my Mama because it wouldn't be embarrassing, and I really want her to listen.

The phrase 'like sing' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here. 'In front of the person' should be 'in front of someone' for generality. 'Because the embarrassing no' is ungrammatical; it should be 'because it wouldn't be embarrassing'. Prepositions and sentence structure need correction for clarity and correctness.

× I think yes, because the melody is really filled with up because it's blow all our stress so it can bring us energy and is also bring us like a lot a lot of things to relax.

✓ I think yes, because the melody really lifts us up by blowing away all our stress, so it can bring us energy and also bring us many things to help us relax.

The phrase 'filled with up' is incorrect; 'lifts us up' is appropriate. 'It's blow all our stress' should be 'it blows away all our stress'. Also, 'is also bring us like a lot a lot of things' is ungrammatical; it should be 'also bring us many things'. Adjective and adverb usage and verb forms need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.