Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，注意时态和单词拼写，提升表达的自然流畅度。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have liked singing since I was a child. When I was in primary school, I joined the singing club and enjoyed music classes taught by my English and singing teachers. Singing has been my favorite activity ever since, and I still enjoy singing every day.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节，避免模糊表达。

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. When I was a child, my school focused more on academic subjects and did not offer singing classes, so I did not have the chance to learn singing formally.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法和用词错误，建议注意单复数和冠词的使用，表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for people I know well, such as my family and friends. Singing in front of strangers feels a bit strange and awkward to me, so I usually choose to perform for familiar people.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够连贯，存在语法和词汇错误，建议使用连词连接句子，注意词汇搭配，提升表达的准确性和流畅度。

Ejemplo: Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people. I often enjoy listening to music with my earphones because it makes me feel joyful and helps me relieve stress from work.

× I like singing from the childhood, you know, in the primary school I'm at my singing club, and from that time I learned singing from my English teacher and my singing teacher's music classes as my favorite class from then on.

✓ I have liked singing since childhood. In primary school, I was in my singing club, and from that time I learned singing from my English teacher and my singing teacher's music classes, which have been my favorite classes since then.

这里“from the childhood”应改为“since childhood”，表示从过去某时开始持续到现在。名词“class”应使用复数“classes”，因为提到了多个课程。

× And now I still like seeing only every day.

✓ And now I still like singing every day.

这里“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。

× Well, actually I didn't had any clue of how to seem very professionally because from my childhood the study should be focused on, so the schools do not pay much attention on the scene.

✓ Well, actually I didn't have any clue of how to sing very professionally because since my childhood the study should have been focused on that, so the schools did not pay much attention to singing.

“didn't had”应为“didn't have”，助动词“did”后动词用原形。动词“seem”应为“sing”。“do not pay”应与过去时态一致，改为“did not pay”。介词“on the scene”应为“to singing”。

× So there's no class which tailored for us to study.

✓ So there was no class tailored for us to study.

“there's”应为过去时“there was”，因为前文为过去时。

× Well, I think it's some people really familiar and like my families and friends because they are the only people I want to sing for them.

✓ Well, I think it's some really familiar people like my family and friends because they are the only people I want to sing for.

“some people really familiar”语序错误，应为“some really familiar people”。“families”应为单数“family”，表示家庭。

× So I prefer to sing familiar peoples.

✓ So I prefer to sing for familiar people.

“peoples”是指民族，应使用“people”表示人们。

× because they are the only people I want to sing for them.

✓ because they are the only people I want to sing for.

“sing for them”中“them”多余，动词短语“sing for”后不需要重复宾语代词。

× It's really an enjoyable time for me because it can bring many joyness to me and release my pressure and to be not so be stressed from the work.

✓ It's really an enjoyable time for me because it can bring me much joy and relieve my stress so that I am not so stressed from work.

“joyness”不是正确名词，应为“joy”。“release my pressure”应为“relieve my stress”。“to be not so be stressed”结构错误，应改为“so that I am not so stressed”。