Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。"funny"はこの文脈では適切ではなく、"relax"の使い方も間違っています。より自然な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: 文法が不正確で意味が伝わりにくいです。"I have never long to think"は意味不明で、"how to do singing"も不自然です。正しい文法で、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I want to learn in the future.

Sugerencia: 質問は「誰のために歌いたいか」ですが、答えは「友達と一緒に歌いたい」となっており、質問に直接答えていません。質問の意図に沿った答えを心がけましょう。

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my family because they always support me.

Sugerencia: 内容は良いですが、文法ミスが目立ちます。"can bringing"は"can bring"に、"make"は"makes"に直す必要があります。接続詞も適切に使われていますが、より自然な表現を目指しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it makes them feel relaxed and joyful. Also, singing often helps people make new friends and enjoy social activities together.

× Yes, I like singing because it is. Funny for me to make relax.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it is fun for me and helps me relax.

The word 'Funny' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; the correct adjective is 'fun'. Also, 'to make relax' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me relax' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× No, I have never long to think, but I want to learn how to do singing.

✓ No, I have never thought about it for long, but I want to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'have never long to think' is grammatically incorrect. The correct past participle form 'thought' should be used with 'have never'. Also, 'how to do singing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'how to sing'.

× I want to sing with my friend because my friend is good at singing.

✓ I want to sing for my friend because my friend is good at singing.

The question asks 'Who do you want to sing for?', so the preposition 'for' is appropriate here instead of 'with'. Using 'with' changes the meaning to singing together, which does not answer the question properly.

× Yes, I think singing can bringing happiness to people because it make them feel happy and relax.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it makes them feel happy and relaxed.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'bring' should be used, not 'bringing'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed' as an adjective describing feelings.

× Also singing often helps people make new friends and enjoy social activity together.

✓ Also, singing often helps people make new friends and enjoy social activities together.

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' because it refers to multiple social events. Also, a comma after 'Also' improves sentence clarity.