Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和错误，使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. Although I'm not very good at it, I enjoy singing for fun and relaxation.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'receive systemic practice'应为'have received systematic training'。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。

Ejemplo: No, I have never received any formal singing training. I usually learn songs by listening carefully to the lyrics and trying to imitate the singer's style.

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I usually sing for myself because it helps me feel grateful and brave. Sometimes, I also sing for my family and friends to celebrate special occasions or share my feelings.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但有重复和语法错误，如'I I'和'scene'应为'singing'。建议注意发音和用词准确，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I agree that singing can bring happiness to people. When I listen to songs or sing myself, I feel joyful, and I believe others can feel positive emotions too.

× I just like but I am not able to sing very well and others who enjoy my seeing, they saw my listening.

✓ I just like it but I am not able to sing very well, and others who enjoy my singing, they enjoy listening to me.

The pronouns 'my seeing' and 'my listening' are incorrect. 'Seeing' should be 'singing' and 'listening' should be 'listening to me' to correctly express the meaning. Also, 'like' needs an object 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× No, I have never receive systemic practice or systematic training of seeing it.

✓ No, I have never received systematic practice or systematic training in singing.

The verb 'receive' should be in the past participle form 'received' to match the present perfect tense 'have never received'. Also, 'systemic' should be 'systematic' and 'seeing' should be 'singing'. The preposition 'of' should be 'in' to correctly collocate with 'training'.

× I always follow the singer one by a lyric, lyrics by lyrics, sentence by sentence, which will help me.

✓ I always follow the singer one lyric at a time, lyrics by lyrics, sentence by sentence, which helps me.

The phrase 'one by a lyric' is incorrect; it should be 'one lyric at a time' to express the idea properly. Also, 'which will help me' is better as 'which helps me' to indicate habitual action.

× I think I want to think for myself because I am thankful for my brave and my luck and my devoting into the life if for others I may sing for my friends or my family to congratulate or to express my weakness.

✓ I think I want to sing for myself because I am thankful for my bravery, my luck, and my devotion to life. If for others, I may sing for my friends or my family to congratulate them or to express my feelings.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'think for myself' should be 'sing for myself'; 'brave' should be 'bravery'; 'devoting into the life' should be 'devotion to life'; 'if for others' should be 'if for others'; 'to congratulate or to express my weakness' is unclear and corrected to 'to congratulate them or to express my feelings' for clarity.

× Yes, I I actually agree with this idea that seeing could bring happiness to other people.

✓ Yes, I actually agree with this idea that singing could bring happiness to other people.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect and should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error.

× Whenever I think I or when I listen to others singing, I can feel happiness through their songs, through their voice.

✓ Whenever I think or when I listen to others singing, I can feel happiness through their songs, through their voices.

The phrase 'I think I' is incorrect; it should be 'I think'. Also, 'voice' should be plural 'voices' to agree with 'others'.

× And when I sing for others, people will feel happiness and some other positive emotion from my scene.

✓ And when I sing for others, people will feel happiness and some other positive emotions from my singing.

The word 'scene' is incorrect and should be 'singing' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'some other'.