Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding awkward phrases like "that have a icky feeling." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I don't really like singing because I have a rough and masculine voice, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Therefore, I enjoy listening to songs much more than singing."

Ejemplo: I don't really like singing because my voice is quite rough and masculine, which makes me feel a bit uncomfortable. Therefore, I prefer listening to songs rather than singing myself.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making it more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, "Yes, my mom taught me to sing when I was three years old, but I realized it wasn't for me because my voice isn't very good and I can't hold tunes well."

Ejemplo: Yes, my mom taught me to sing when I was three years old, but I soon realized it wasn't for me because my voice isn't very good and I can't hold tunes well.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, "I only feel confident singing in front of my brother, friends, and partner because they enjoy it even though I can't control my voice well."

Ejemplo: I only feel confident singing in front of my brother, friends, and partner because they enjoy it even though I can't control my voice well.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor grammar mistakes and using linking words for coherence. For example, "Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and enjoy the moment. For instance, many feel relaxed and joyful when singing their favorite songs, which improves their mood and reduces stress."

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and enjoy the moment. For instance, many feel relaxed and joyful when singing their favorite songs, which improves their mood and reduces stress.

× I don't really like singing because I have a rough and masculine voice which makes me feel a bit uncomfortable and that have a icky feeling.

✓ I don't really like singing because I have a rough and masculine voice which makes me feel a bit uncomfortable and that has an icky feeling.

The subject 'that' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. Using 'have' here is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Yes, my mom just taught me to sing when I when I was three years old, but then it's just not for me as my voice is not that good and I am not able to hold any tunes.

✓ Yes, my mom just taught me to sing when I was three years old, but then it was just not for me as my voice was not that good and I was not able to hold any tunes.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, verbs should be in past tense: 'was' instead of 'is' and 'was not able' instead of 'am not able' to maintain tense consistency.

× Only my brother, my friends and my partner actually have confidence singing in front of them even though I don't able to tone my voice up and they're just enjoying it.

✓ Only my brother, my friends and my partner actually have confidence singing in front of them even though I am not able to tone my voice up and they're just enjoying it.

The phrase 'I don't able' is incorrect because 'able' requires a form of 'to be' verb. The correct form is 'I am not able'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and auxiliary verbs.

× Only my brother, my friends and my partner actually have confidence singing in front of them even though I don't able to tone my voice up and they're just enjoying it.

✓ Only my brother, my friends and my partner actually have confidence singing in front of them even though I am not able to tone my voice up, and they're just enjoying it.

A comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity and separates two independent clauses. This is a sentence structure improvement.

× Yes, I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and just feel the moment. For example, many people feel relaxed and joyful when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve them their mood and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and just feel the moment. For example, many people feel relaxed and joyful when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood and reduce stress.

The phrase 'helps improve them their mood' is incorrect. The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'helps improve their mood'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.