Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
I am a fan of singing because I feel like singing helps me relax and helps me find myself. When I sing I feel like I can become the the person that I have always wanted to be and it also helps me unleash all my emotions.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
I learned how to sing when I was at primary school. I used to have a really good voice and I was always praised at school for my saying so I figured that I should elevate my skills by going to a singing lesson. I did really well at first, but ultimately I had to drop out because of schedule.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I have always wanted to sing for one of my favorite artists since childhood, Ariana Grande. She is a powerful vocalist and I think if I have a chance to sing for her, it will be the best moment of my life. I also think that she has a really good platform and I want to spread it.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
I absolutely believe that seeing can bring happiness to people. I used to feel depressed before but after I found saying I found a New Hope in life and I felt happiness and I felt free when I sing. So I think that this could also be applied to other people.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 85.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cảm xúc, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tăng tính hiệu quả. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Moreover, it allows me to connect with my true self and feel more confident.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác từ 'singing' thay vì 'saying'. Câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi phát âm.
Ejemplo: I learned to sing when I was in primary school. Since I received praise for my voice, I decided to take singing lessons. Although I did well initially, I had to stop due to my busy schedule.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên làm rõ ý "spread it" để người nghe hiểu rõ hơn.
Ejemplo: Since childhood, I have dreamed of singing for my favorite artist, Ariana Grande, who is a powerful vocalist. If I had the chance, it would be the best moment of my life because I could share her inspiring music with a wider audience.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm đúng từ 'singing' thay vì 'seeing' hay 'saying'. Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness. When I felt depressed, singing gave me new hope and freedom. Therefore, I think it can have the same positive effect on others.
Gramática
× I was always praised at school for my saying so I figured that I should elevate my skills by going to a singing lesson.
✓ I was always praised at school for my singing so I figured that I should elevate my skills by going to a singing lesson.
The word 'saying' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'singing' to refer to the act or skill of singing. This is a singular/plural issue because the wrong form of the noun is used.
× I had to drop out because of schedule.
✓ I had to drop out because of the schedule.
The noun 'schedule' requires the definite article 'the' here to specify which schedule is being referred to. Omitting 'the' is an article/preposition usage error.
× I absolutely believe that seeing can bring happiness to people.
✓ I absolutely believe that singing can bring happiness to people.
The word 'seeing' is a wrong pronoun or word choice here; the intended word is 'singing'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns or word choice error.
× after I found saying I found a New Hope in life and I felt happiness and I felt free when I sing.
✓ after I found singing I found a new hope in life and I felt happiness and I felt free when I sing.
The word 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' to refer to the act of singing. Also, 'New Hope' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun, so 'new hope' is correct. This is a singular/plural and capitalization issue.
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