Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases like 'remembering relics' and 'furious throat'. Try to give a clear and direct response with simple, correct vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't like singing because it makes me tired and sometimes hurts my throat. Also, I find it stressful to remember the lyrics. Therefore, I usually avoid singing.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid repeating words and focus on clear sentence structure.

Ejemplo: I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I want to because I admire people who can sing well. Singing is a special talent, and I hope to develop it myself one day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words to explain your reasons.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my sister because she is learning English. Singing English songs together could help her practice and improve her language skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use simple and correct vocabulary to make your point understandable.

Ejemplo: I think singing can bring happiness to many people because it allows them to express their feelings. However, sometimes people who sing badly may feel embarrassed, which can be stressful.

× Singing, I don't like singing because it just makes me tired and remembering relics are just stressful and remembering relics takes a lot of time and by listen by singing I have furious throat frequently.

✓ Singing, I don't like singing because it just makes me tired and remembering relics is just stressful and remembering relics takes a lot of time and by listening and singing I frequently have a sore throat.

The phrase 'by listen by singing' is incorrect; the verb after 'by' should be in the -ing form, so 'listening' and 'singing' are correct. Also, 'remembering relics are just stressful' should be 'remembering relics is just stressful' because 'remembering relics' is singular as a gerund phrase.

× I haven't learned how to sing, but I want to learn how to because singing is one of the very talented things that that people do.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing, but I want to learn because singing is one of the very talented things that people do.

The phrase 'I want to learn how to' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'I want to learn' or 'I want to learn how to sing'. Also, the repeated 'that that' is a redundancy and should be corrected to a single 'that'.

× So I sometimes admire people through things well, so I want to be like them.

✓ So I sometimes admire people for their talents, so I want to be like them.

The phrase 'admire people through things well' is unclear and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' when admiring someone for their qualities or talents.

× That is a very tough question, but I want to sing song for my sister I guess because I usually listen to songs in English and my sister is practicing English, so by listen by singing English songs too hard I guess.

✓ That is a very tough question, but I want to sing a song for my sister I guess because I usually listen to songs in English and my sister is practicing English, so listening to and singing English songs is quite hard I guess.

The phrase 'by listen by singing' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to and singing'. Also, 'sing song' should be 'sing a song' because 'song' is countable and requires an article here.

× I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because many people through things are very confident, like oh I'm singing very well and usually they think very bad so listen to the songs. Makes me stressed.

✓ I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because many people through things are very confident, like 'Oh, I'm singing very well,' but usually they think badly, so listening to the songs makes me stressed.

The phrase 'think very bad' is incorrect; the adverb form 'badly' should be used. Also, 'listen to the songs. Makes me stressed.' is a sentence fragment and should be combined properly. The phrase 'through things' is unclear but not corrected here as it is not in the problem list.