Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'improve my workers'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about your singing experience and why you enjoy it.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because I've had a passion for it since childhood. Whenever I heard a song, I would practice singing it. Moreover, I am currently learning to play musical instruments to enhance my skills. Overall, singing is my favourite hobby because it allows me to express myself creatively.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about what techniques you are learning and how singing benefits you emotionally.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am still learning how to sing fluently by practicing various techniques such as breath control and pitch accuracy. Singing helps me relax and reduces my stress, which is why I enjoy it more than other hobbies.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific about why you want to sing for your mother and describe the situation clearly.

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my mother because she loves music but cannot sing herself. Whenever I have free time, I play songs on my organ or violin and sing for her, which makes her very happy.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Be specific about how singing affects emotions and mention both positive and negative feelings clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps express emotions. Through songs, people can feel joy, relieve sadness, and relax their minds, which improves their overall mood.

× Actually, yes, I like singing since I have a little bit talent in singing.

✓ Actually, yes, I like singing since I have a little bit of talent in singing.

The phrase 'a little bit talent' is missing the preposition 'of' which is necessary to correctly quantify 'talent'. The correct phrase is 'a little bit of talent'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× When I was, uh, a child, I practice singing songs in everywhere I heard a song.

✓ When I was, uh, a child, I practiced singing songs everywhere I heard a song.

The verb 'practice' should be in the past tense 'practiced' to match the past time reference 'When I was a child'. Also, 'in everywhere' is incorrect; 'everywhere' alone is sufficient without 'in'.

× And still I'm trying to improve my workers and in instruments as well.

✓ And still I'm trying to improve my works and instruments as well.

The word 'workers' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'works' meaning musical pieces or skills. Also, 'in instruments' should be 'instruments' without 'in'.

× I'm trying to be better in every way in musical side.

✓ I'm trying to be better in every way on the musical side.

The phrase 'in musical side' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for 'on the musical side'.

× So basically I prefer singing more than other hobbies I I can have.

✓ So basically I prefer singing more than other hobbies I can have.

There is a repeated 'I' which is a typographical error and should be removed.

× Of course I'm still learning how to sing in a fluent way and I'm still learning the techniques and clips, so I prefer the singing more than the other hobbies I do.

✓ Of course, I'm still learning how to sing fluently and I'm still learning the techniques and clips, so I prefer singing more than the other hobbies I do.

The phrase 'in a fluent way' is better expressed as 'fluently' (adverb). Also, 'the singing' should be 'singing' without 'the' as it is a general activity.

× Sometimes I want to think for my mother, since she's very interest, interested in music, but somehow she Can't Sing, but she wanna sing, see how I sing.

✓ Sometimes I want to sing for my mother, since she's very interested in music, but somehow she can't sing, but she wants to sing, see how I sing.

The phrase 'want to think for my mother' is incorrect; it should be 'want to sing for my mother'. 'Interest' should be 'interested' (adjective). 'Can't Sing' should be lowercase 'can't sing'. 'Wanna' is informal; 'wants to' is correct in formal speech.

× And so I prefer to sing for her. Every time I have a chance, I have time, I bring up song and my organ and my violin to sing a song and to see and watch her how she.

✓ And so I prefer to sing for her. Every time I have a chance and time, I bring out a song and my organ and my violin to sing and to see how she reacts.

The phrase 'bring up song' is incorrect; it should be 'bring out a song'. The sentence 'to see and watch her how she' is incomplete and unclear; it should be rephrased to 'to see how she reacts' or similar for clarity.

× Happiness is the thing that we can receive from singing songs as well as the sadness.

✓ Happiness is something that we can receive from singing songs as well as sadness.

The phrase 'the sadness' is incorrect here; 'sadness' as an uncountable noun does not need 'the'. Also, 'the thing' is better replaced with 'something' for naturalness.

× I would say that happiness is one of the main thing we can receive through songs.

✓ I would say that happiness is one of the main things we can receive through songs.

The phrase 'one of the main thing' is incorrect because 'one of the' requires a plural noun; it should be 'one of the main things'.

× Even I receive many benefits as happiness, such as happiness and the you know, the sadness, moods and all the relaxed.

✓ I even receive many benefits such as happiness, sadness, moods, and relaxation.

The sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words like 'the you know, the'. 'Relaxed' is an adjective; the noun form 'relaxation' is appropriate here. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.