Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, say "I don't like singing because my voice is not good, but I enjoy listening to music because it helps me relax and feel emotional."

Ejemplo: I don't like singing because my voice is not good, but I enjoy listening to music because it helps me relax and sometimes makes me feel emotional.

Sugerencia: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct grammar and clear expressions. Avoid confusing phrases like "pay the free charge" and "not have talent to that fear." Also, keep your answer focused and simple. For example, say "No, I have never learned to sing because I don't have enough money and I think I don't have talent, so I don't want to waste money."

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned to sing because I don't have enough money and I think I don't have talent, so I don't want to waste money.

Sugerencia: In English (Cambodia), improve your answer by using correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say "I want to sing for my mother because she is like both a father and mother to me. She does everything for her children and never thinks about herself. I love her very much, so I want to sing for her."

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my mother because she is like both a father and mother to me. She does everything for her children and never thinks about herself. I love her very much, so I want to sing for her.

Sugerencia: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid repetition and use clearer, more natural sentences. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically. For example, say "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because some people enjoy romantic gestures. When their partner sings to them, it makes them feel happy and loved."

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because some people enjoy romantic gestures. When their partner sings to them, it makes them feel happy and loved.

× No I don't like singing because my voice are not good but I like to listening to the music because it can help me release some stress and sometimes I can feel emotional too.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is not good, but I like listening to music because it can help me release some stress and sometimes I can feel emotional too.

The subject 'voice' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'like to listening' is incorrect; it should be 'like listening' because 'like' is followed by the gerund form. 'The music' is corrected to 'music' as a general noun without 'the'.

× No I don't like singing because my voice are not good but I like to listening to the music because it can help me release some stress and sometimes I can feel emotional too.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is not good, but I like listening to music because it can help me release some stress and sometimes I can feel emotional too.

After the verb 'like', the gerund form 'listening' should be used instead of the infinitive 'to listening'.

× No, I have never learned how to sing before because I don't have enough money to pay the free charge and furthermore I'm not have talent to that fear, so I don't want to waste my money into that.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing before because I don't have enough money to pay the fee, and furthermore, I don't have the talent for that, so I don't want to waste my money on it.

'Free charge' is incorrect; it should be 'fee'. 'I'm not have talent' is wrong; correct form is 'I don't have talent'. 'To that fear' is incorrect; it should be 'for that'. 'Waste my money into that' should be 'waste my money on it'. These corrections fix verb tense and preposition usage.

× No, I have never learned how to sing before because I don't have enough money to pay the free charge and furthermore I'm not have talent to that fear, so I don't want to waste my money into that.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing before because I don't have enough money to pay the fee, and furthermore, I don't have the talent for that, so I don't want to waste my money on it.

The prepositions 'to' and 'into' are incorrectly used here. The correct prepositions are 'for' (talent for something) and 'on' (waste money on something).

× For me I want to sing for my mother because she stand for a father and a mother of my life.

✓ For me, I want to sing for my mother because she stands for both a father and a mother in my life.

The verb 'stand' should be 'stands' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'a father and a mother of my life' is better expressed as 'both a father and a mother in my life'.

× She do everything for her children and doesn't care about herself at all and I love her so much so I want to sing for her.

✓ She does everything for her children and doesn't care about herself at all, and I love her so much, so I want to sing for her.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× I think it it can be because some people want a romantic life so they need their partner or their lover to sing her a song so she can feel happy and think that their partner was a romantic partner in her life, in her life.

✓ I think it can be because some people want a romantic life, so they need their partner or lover to sing them a song so they can feel happy and think that their partner is a romantic partner in their life.

The pronouns 'her' and 'she' are incorrectly used when referring to a general 'some people' (plural). They should be 'them' and 'they' to match the plural antecedent. Also, 'was' is changed to 'is' to maintain present tense consistency.