Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then provide a reason or example. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't usually enjoy singing, but I like to sing quietly when I'm alone, especially while taking a bath. It helps me relax and makes the moment more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'the thing like that.' Also, correct grammar mistakes and be more specific about your experience with singing.

Ejemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because my family is quite conservative and doesn't encourage music. However, I often sing softly to myself for fun.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and adding a reason to support your choice. Also, avoid ending with 'and that's it' as it sounds informal and abrupt.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my mom and other loved ones, especially my husband, because singing for them would show my affection and make them happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'sadness' instead of 'sorrowness' and avoid vague phrases like 'and this.'

Ejemplo: I believe singing can bring both happiness and sadness to people. For example, people might sing joyful songs when they feel happy, but they also listen to sad songs when they experience heartbreak.

× Actually I am not a big fan of music but when I am alone and when I taking a bath I was I am start singing because it makes me feel more enjoyable the things I am doing right now and.

✓ Actually I am not a big fan of music but when I am alone and when I am taking a bath I start singing because it makes me feel more enjoyment in the things I am doing right now.

The phrase 'when I taking a bath' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'taking', so it should be 'when I am taking a bath'. Also, 'I was I am start singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I start singing' to match the present tense context. Additionally, 'feel more enjoyable the things' is incorrect; it should be 'feel more enjoyment in the things' to use the noun form correctly.

× Actually I am not a big fan of music but when I am alone and when I taking a bath I was I am start singing because it makes me feel more enjoyable the things I am doing right now and.

✓ Actually I am not a big fan of music but when I am alone and when I am taking a bath I start singing because it makes me feel more enjoyment in the things I am doing right now.

The sentence ends with 'and' without completing the thought, which is incorrect conjunction usage. The sentence should be completed or the conjunction removed to avoid a sentence fragment.

× Certainly not. I came from a conservative family and our family doesn't like music and the thing like that and I never tried to learn how to sing but I usually whisper sing all the time.

✓ Certainly not. I come from a conservative family and our family doesn't like music and things like that and I have never tried to learn how to sing but I usually whisper sing all the time.

The phrase 'I came from' should be in present tense 'I come from' to indicate a current state. Also, 'I never tried' should be 'I have never tried' to correctly express an experience up to now. 'The thing like that' is incorrect; it should be 'things like that'.

× Certainly not. I came from a conservative family and our family doesn't like music and the thing like that and I never tried to learn how to sing but I usually whisper sing all the time.

✓ Certainly not. I come from a conservative family and our family doesn't like music and things like that and I have never tried to learn how to sing but I usually whisper sing all the time.

The phrase 'the thing like that' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'things like that' to refer to similar items or concepts.

× Of course I want to sing for my mom and my loved ones and specially I want to sing for my husband and that's it.

✓ Of course I want to sing for my mom and my loved ones and especially I want to sing for my husband and that's it.

The word 'specially' is an adverb meaning 'in a special manner', but the correct word here is 'especially', which means 'particularly' or 'above all'.

× I think singing can bring both happiness and sorrowness to people because when someone gets heartbreak and they listen to sorrow music or soft music and when someone feel enjoy and this.

✓ I think singing can bring both happiness and sadness to people because when someone experiences heartbreak and listens to sad music or soft music, and when someone feels joy, this happens.

The word 'sorrowness' is not a correct noun; the correct noun is 'sadness'. Also, 'gets heartbreak' should be 'experiences heartbreak'. 'Sorrow music' should be 'sad music'. 'Someone feel enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'someone feels joy'. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.