Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is heartfelt and expressive, which is great. However, try to avoid repetition and minor hesitations like "than than" and "I I". Also, aim to keep your answer concise and clear by structuring it with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, start with a direct statement about your love for singing, then explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I love singing because it brings me peace and allows me to escape into my own world. Moreover, music resonates deeply with me, making singing a very important part of my life.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your opinion clearly, but there are some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "I do best believe" and the incomplete ending. Try to use correct expressions and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I have never formally learnt how to sing, but I believe I have a natural talent. However, I know that daily practice is essential if I want to improve and sing better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest and clear, but try to avoid repetition like "I'm I'm" and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, you can add a little more detail to enrich your response, such as explaining why you feel shy or how it affects your singing.

Ejemplo: I don't have a particular person I want to sing for because I'm naturally shy. Therefore, expressing myself publicly or in front of others is quite challenging for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more varied vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a more specific example or reason.

Ejemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness, particularly to those who have a strong connection with music. For instance, people who genuinely love music often feel joyful when they sing or listen to songs.

× I'd rather say that I love singing than than that I like singing because singing forms a big part of me.

✓ I'd rather say that I love singing than that I like singing because singing forms a big part of me.

The sentence contains a repeated conjunction 'than than' which is incorrect. Only one 'than' is needed to compare two ideas. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and correctness.

× I find so much peace and singing I I always feel like I'm in my own world whenever I'm singing.

✓ I find so much peace in singing. I always feel like I'm in my own world whenever I'm singing.

The phrase 'peace and singing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'peace in singing' to express the source of peace. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× I think that I'm good in singing.

✓ I think that I'm good at singing.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at' rather than 'in'. 'Good at' indicates proficiency in an activity.

× However, it takes practice every day in order for me to be better, to sing better than I do on a.

✓ However, it takes practice every day in order for me to improve and sing better than I do now.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'on a' which is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought and improves sentence structure for clarity.