Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên chia câu rõ ràng, sử dụng thì đúng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về việc hát giúp bạn cảm thấy thế nào và khi nào bạn thường hát.

Ejemplo: I love singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I usually sing every day while studying or cooking, as music helps me concentrate on my tasks.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do học hát và những lợi ích bạn nhận được. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I started learning how to sing when I was six years old. I practiced with my sister to improve my voice and breathing techniques, which helped me feel more confident when singing.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn cảm xúc khi hát cùng người thân và bạn bè, và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'suitable'.

Ejemplo: I want to sing with my friends and parents because singing together makes me feel comfortable. I can sing loudly and enjoy their compliments, which motivates me.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ cho đúng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể hơn và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to many people because it helps us feel comfortable and less shy around each other.

× I love singing because when I singing I feel happy and relaxed.

✓ I love singing because when I am singing I feel happy and relaxed.

The verb 'singing' needs to be preceded by the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb, which is necessary for correct grammar.

× I can sing every day when I studying I cooking and music can help me concentrate on the work what I do.

✓ I can sing every day when I am studying or cooking, and music can help me concentrate on the work I do.

The verbs 'studying' and 'cooking' need the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'and' should connect the activities, and 'what I do' should be 'I do' for clarity.

× Yes I have when I was 6.

✓ Yes, I have when I was 6 years old.

Adding 'years old' after '6' clarifies the age. Also, a comma after 'Yes' improves readability.

× I have learned singing with my sister because of improve my voice, my breath when I sing and I feel my voice.

✓ I have learned singing with my sister to improve my voice and my breath when I sing, and I feel my voice improving.

The phrase 'because of improve' is incorrect; it should be 'to improve' to express purpose. Also, 'I feel my voice' is incomplete; 'I feel my voice improving' is clearer.

× I want sing with my friends, my parents, because when I sing with them I feel suitable and I can sing aloud and give many compliments from them.

✓ I want to sing with my friends and my parents because when I sing with them I feel comfortable and I can sing aloud and receive many compliments from them.

The verb 'want' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'sing'. 'Suitable' is incorrect here; 'comfortable' fits better. 'Give many compliments from them' should be 'receive many compliments from them'.

× Yes I do. I think singing bring many happiness to most of people because when we sing we feel comfortable and not shy to each other.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing brings much happiness to most people because when we sing we feel comfortable and not shy with each other.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Many happiness' is incorrect; 'much happiness' is correct because 'happiness' is uncountable. 'Not shy to each other' should be 'not shy with each other'.