Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors, and it is somewhat unclear. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise, within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then provide a reason or example.

Ejemplo: I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good. Since I was a child, I have preferred listening to music rather than singing. However, music is still a big hobby of mine.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with a clear structure: state whether you have learnt singing, then explain briefly your experience or reason. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I took a singing class for one month while I was in college. However, I found it quite difficult, so I decided not to continue taking classes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your idea clearly by stating who you want to sing for and why. Use proper sentence structure and vocabulary relevant to the context.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing songs that reflect my history and culture because I really appreciate them.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly whether you think singing brings happiness, then explain your opinion with clear reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to enjoy themselves and spend quality time with friends or colleagues.

× I do not like seeing you 'cause I do not have a good vocal cord and I from my childhood I do not try to sing, but listening music is my hobby.

✓ I do not like singing because I do not have good vocal cords and since my childhood I have not tried to sing, but listening to music is my hobby.

The phrase 'a good vocal cord' is incorrect because 'vocal cords' is plural; humans have two vocal cords. Also, 'listening music' should be 'listening to music' to use the correct preposition. The sentence also needed restructuring for clarity.

× I do not like seeing you 'cause I do not have a good vocal cord and I from my childhood I do not try to sing, but listening music is my hobby.

✓ I do not like singing because I do not have good vocal cords and since my childhood I have not tried to sing, but listening to music is my hobby.

The phrase 'listening music' is incorrect; the correct form is 'listening to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by a noun.

× When I'm studying in college and there was a singing class which I joined only for one month.

✓ When I was studying in college, there was a singing class which I joined for only one month.

The phrase 'When I'm studying' should be in past tense 'When I was studying' to match the past context. Also, 'only for one month' is better placed as 'for only one month' for natural word order.

× So then why I do not take classes?

✓ So then why did I not take classes?

The sentence is a question about a past action, so it should use the past tense auxiliary 'did' and invert the subject and auxiliary verb: 'Why did I not take classes?'. The original sentence structure is incorrect for a question.

× I want to sing for my history and culture who I like it a lot.

✓ I want to sing about my history and culture, which I like a lot.

'Who' is used for people, but 'history and culture' are things, so 'which' is correct. Also, 'like it a lot' is redundant; 'which I like a lot' suffices. The preposition 'for' is better replaced with 'about' when referring to singing related to a topic.

× I didn't think you can bring happiness for people because they can spend and enjoy, spend a good time with their colleagues and. Enjoy singing.

✓ I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because they can spend and enjoy good time with their colleagues and enjoy singing.

The sentence is about a general opinion, so present tense 'don't think' is appropriate instead of past 'didn't think'. Also, 'bring happiness for people' should be 'bring happiness to people'. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.