Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言稍显重复且不够自然。建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法和用词的准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day of studying.

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但表达不够流畅，‘endeavored my best’用法不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并补充一些细节使回答更丰富。

Ejemplo: No, I never took formal singing lessons as a child, but I tried to improve my singing skills by practicing on my own.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但句子稍长且重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复。

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my close friends and family during gatherings. For example, I often play the piano and perform small concerts to entertain them.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达不够自然，‘amazed from those songs’用法错误。建议完整回答问题，使用更准确的词汇，并补充具体原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it uplifts people's mood and creates a positive atmosphere, making them feel hopeful and energized.

× I'm a big fan of singing things.

✓ I'm a big fan of singing.

这里的'singing things'不符合语境，应该直接用'singing'表示喜欢唱歌。'things'多余且不合适。

× I'm keen on listening to music and singing the songs I like and I think it's a good way to release my pressure and to unwind myself from the, you know, the heavy study stress.

✓ I'm keen on listening to music and singing the songs I like, and I think it's a good way to relieve my pressure and unwind myself from, you know, the heavy study stress.

'release my pressure'用词不当，应该用'relieve my pressure'表示缓解压力。'to unwind myself from the'中'the'多余，且逗号使用不当，需调整。

× No, when I was a kid I had no chance to sing at a course, so I endeavored my best to study it by myself.

✓ No, when I was a kid I had no chance to sing in a course, so I endeavored my best to study it by myself.

介词错误，应该用'in a course'表示在课程中。

× Sometimes when I'm at a get together with all my close friends I will play my piano and sing for them.

✓ Sometimes when I'm at a get-together with all my close friends, I will play my piano and sing for them.

'get together'作为名词时应写作'get-together'，且句中缺少逗号。

× Sometimes at family gathering I will do a little concert for them as well.

✓ Sometimes at family gatherings I will do a little concert for them as well.

'family gathering'应为复数形式'family gatherings'，表示多次家庭聚会。

× Yes, every time when people hear high pitched songs, they will feel amazed from those songs because this gave them positive energy and a sense of curiosity and hope.

✓ Yes, every time when people hear high-pitched songs, they feel amazed by those songs because they give them positive energy and a sense of curiosity and hope.

'feel amazed from'用法错误，正确搭配是'feel amazed by'。'this gave'时态不一致，应改为'they give'。

× Also when they.

✓ 句子不完整，建议补充完整内容。

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清。