Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "a lot of song, a lot of songs" and use more precise vocabulary. Also, the phrase "helps me to be in a serene" is awkward; consider saying "helps me feel serene" or "peaceful." Try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I'm in the washroom. It's my favorite time to sing because it helps me relax and feel peaceful after a long day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and awkward phrasing. Instead of repeating "how to sing a song," say it once clearly. Also, avoid uncertain phrases like "I guess." Use linking words to improve flow and be more specific about what you learned.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in seventh grade during music class. We practiced different songs, which really helped me improve my singing skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is heartfelt but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid incomplete sentences like "so that." Use linking words to explain your reasons more smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary, such as "dedicate a song to her" instead of "dedicate one song for her."

Ejemplo: To be honest, I would love to sing for my mother because she is a great singer herself. I want to dedicate a special song to her to show my appreciation and love.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers the main idea but has some unclear and awkward phrases, such as "And in singing it sounds." Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and avoid vague expressions. Be more specific about how singing affects mood and stress.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness and reduce stress from daily life. Moreover, the type of song matters because some songs can uplift our mood and help us forget about our busy schedules.

× That time is my best time when I sing a lot of song, a lot of songs because it helps me to relax, calm down and also it helps me to be in a serene.

✓ That time is my best time when I sing a lot of songs because it helps me to relax, calm down and also it helps me to be serene.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple songs. Also, 'in a serene' is incorrect; 'serene' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. The correct phrase is 'to be serene'.

× Obviously when I was in my 7th standard, I guess that time we had our music class and in that class we used to learn how to sing a song, how to sing a song, and it's really helpful.

✓ Obviously, when I was in my 7th standard, I guess that time we had our music class and in that class we used to learn how to sing a song, and it was really helpful.

The phrase 'it's really helpful' is present tense but the context is past. It should be 'it was really helpful' to maintain past tense consistency.

× My mother, she's really good singer and I want to dedicate one song for her so that.

✓ My mother, she's a really good singer and I want to dedicate one song to her for that reason.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'really good singer'. Also, 'dedicate one song for her so that' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'dedicate one song to her for that reason' to clarify the purpose.

× And in singing it sounds.

✓ And in singing, it depends on the type of song.

The sentence 'And in singing it sounds.' is incomplete and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning. Adding 'it depends on the type of song' clarifies the idea.