Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to make it more concise and natural by avoiding repetition. For example, instead of saying "makes me feel comfortable and makes my mind relaxing," you can say "helps me relax and feel peaceful." Also, keep your answer within 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel peaceful. Singing allows me to express my emotions and forget my worries for a while.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to improve clarity. For example, start with a direct answer, then add supporting details using linking words like "but" or "however."

Ejemplo: I haven't taken formal singing classes, but I often try to sing along with my favourite songs and imitate the singers I admire. This helps me improve my singing skills gradually.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. The question asks who you want to sing for, but you talk about your music preferences instead. Try to answer the question directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I would love to sing for my family and close friends because they always support me. Singing for them would make me feel happy and connected.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, which is good. However, there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrases like "legends and sings." Try to use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness, especially after a long and stressful day. For example, when someone comes home tired and sings their favourite song, it helps them relax and instantly improves their mood.

× I like singing because it makes me feel comfortable and makes my mind relaxing and it's so peaceful to sing.

✓ I like singing because it makes me feel comfortable and makes my mind relaxed and it's so peaceful to sing.

The word 'relaxing' is a present participle used as an adjective meaning 'causing relaxation'. Here, the intended meaning is the state of the mind after singing, so the past participle 'relaxed' should be used instead of 'relaxing'.

× Not really learn the singing by visiting any singing class, but I have tried to sing the songs while listening the music and try to replicate the singers whom I admire the most.

✓ I have not really learned singing by visiting any singing class, but I have tried to sing songs while listening to music and try to replicate the singers whom I admire the most.

The phrase 'Not really learn' is incorrect; the present perfect 'have not really learned' fits better to express experience. Also, 'listening the music' should be 'listening to music' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.

× Not really learn the singing by visiting any singing class, but I have tried to sing the songs while listening the music and try to replicate the singers whom I admire the most.

✓ I have not really learned singing by visiting any singing class, but I have tried to sing songs while listening to music and try to replicate the singers whom I admire the most.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Therefore, 'listening the music' should be corrected to 'listening to music'.

× I love listening to music which are a little romantic songs and basically it's my mother tongue language which is Kannada.

✓ I love listening to music which is a little romantic songs and basically it's my mother tongue language which is Kannada.

The subject 'music' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. However, the sentence is awkward; better phrasing would be 'I love listening to music, especially romantic songs, and basically it's in my mother tongue, Kannada.'

× I love listening to music which are a little romantic songs and basically it's my mother tongue language which is Kannada.

✓ I love listening to music which includes a few romantic songs and basically it's my mother tongue language which is Kannada.

The phrase 'which are a little romantic songs' is incorrect because 'music' is singular and cannot be 'are songs'. It should be rephrased to indicate that the music includes romantic songs.

× For example, if someone comes home and tired and legends and sings to the favorite song, it can help them relax and improve their mood instantly.

✓ For example, if someone comes home tired and listens and sings to their favorite song, it can help them relax and improve their mood instantly.

The original sentence has structural errors: 'and tired and legends' is incorrect. It should be 'comes home tired and listens and sings to their favorite song'. Also, 'the favorite song' should be 'their favorite song' to indicate possession.