Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中多次将“singing”误说成“seeing”，这影响了表达的准确性。建议加强发音练习，特别是区分相似音词。同时，回答应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it, and I feel awkward singing in public.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned singing in my school music lessons, but I realized that I'm not very good at it.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较好，但句子稍显冗长。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意时态一致性。

Ejemplo: If possible, I would like to sing for my parents to show my appreciation because they always support what I want to do.

Sugerencia: 回答中多次错误使用“she”和“see”代替“singing”，影响理解。建议加强词汇和发音练习，确保用词准确。句子结构也需简化以提高表达清晰度。

Ejemplo: Of course, I think singing is a good way for people to relieve stress. When I feel down, I often choose to sing, even though I'm not very good at it.

× No, I don't like seeing.

✓ No, I don't like singing.

这里的动词应该是'sing'的动名词形式'singing'，表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事。'seeing'是'看见'的意思，与上下文不符。

× I'm not good at seeing, and I think seeing in the public is awkward.

✓ I'm not good at singing, and I think singing in public is awkward.

同样，'seeing'应改为'singing'，因为谈论的是唱歌。'in the public'应改为'in public'，表示在公众场合。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，'learned'是美式英语。根据语境选择统一用法。这里建议用'learned'。

× Of course, in my music lessons of school, also in music lessons, I found I'm not good at singing.

✓ Of course, in my school music lessons, I also found I'm not good at singing.

句子结构不清晰，'music lessons of school'应改为'school music lessons'，并且去掉重复的'music lessons'。

× If possible, I want to sing for my parents to show my appreciation to them because they always support the things that I wanted to do.

✓ If possible, I want to sing for my parents to show my appreciation to them because they always support the things that I want to do.

时态不一致，'wanted'应改为现在时'want'，因为表达的是持续的支持。

× Of course, from my perspective, she is a good way for some people to release their stress and when I felt down, I always chose to see, although I'm not good at seeing.

✓ Of course, from my perspective, singing is a good way for some people to release their stress, and when I feel down, I always choose to sing, although I'm not good at singing.

'she'指代错误，应为'singing'。'felt'和'chose'应改为现在时'feel'和'choose'，保持时态一致。'see'应改为'sing'。