Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。可以尝试用更自然流畅的表达方式来说明喜欢唱歌的原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I think I developed this interest since I was a child because my family often sang together.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免重复使用介词“to”。同时，回答可以更简洁明了，突出重点。

Ejemplo: I have never taken singing lessons, but I played the piano for four years. My piano teacher said I have a good voice and suggested I learn singing, but my mother didn't agree.

Sugerencia: 回答内容不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思。句子结构混乱，表达不够连贯。建议简化表达，使用连接词使内容更连贯，并完整表达想法。

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I am not a professional singer. When I was a child, I used to sing for others, but they didn't pay much attention, which made me feel sad.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了个人感受，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“loyalist part”应为“lowest point”。建议注意词汇选择和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I was 18, I went through a difficult time, but listening to and singing songs, especially one called 'Shenyang', gave me strength and energy.

× Definitely yes I like seeing but I don't know why I like singing too much.

✓ Definitely yes, I like singing but I don't know why I like singing too much.

这里'seeing'是动词的现在分词形式，但句意应表达喜欢唱歌，正确动词是'singing'。应使用'singing'表示喜欢唱歌。

× I remember I asked this question to my mother and she told me maybe you listened to many songs before you born or you bring you raised up with your aunt and your aunt like saying it's funny but I don't know how to explain why I like singing too much.

✓ I remember I asked this question to my mother and she told me maybe you listened to many songs before you were born or you were raised up by your aunt and your aunt likes singing, it's funny but I don't know how to explain why I like singing too much.

'before you born'缺少被动语态，应为'before you were born'；'you bring you raised up'结构错误，应为'you were raised up'；'your aunt like saying'主谓不一致，应为'your aunt likes singing'。这些都是时态和主谓一致错误。

× my piano teacher told me I should to learn singing because I have a good voice, but my mother think it's meaningless so she don't let me to study how to sing.

✓ my piano teacher told me I should learn singing because I have a good voice, but my mother thinks it's meaningless so she doesn't let me study how to sing.

情态动词'should'后不加'to'，应为'should learn'；'my mother think'主谓不一致，应为'my mother thinks'；'she don't let me to study'应为'she doesn't let me study'，情态动词和助动词后动词不带'to'。

× I want to sing for myself because I'm not a singer, I don't need to sing for everyone.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I'm not a singer, I don't need to sing for everyone else.

'everyone'是单数代词，后面不直接跟复数名词，需加'else'表示其他人，语义更完整。

× And when I was a little girl I like to sing for others.

✓ And when I was a little girl I liked to sing for others.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去式'liked'，而不是现在式'like'。

× But I noticed that they don't care about me, they don't care what I say, they don't care my voice.

✓ But I noticed that they didn't care about me, they didn't care what I said, they didn't care about my voice.

前文为过去时态，后续动作也应保持过去时态；'don't care my voice'缺少介词，正确用法是'care about my voice'。

× After that I thought I need.

✓ After that I thought I needed to do something.

句子不完整，缺少宾语或补语，导致句意不明，应补充完整表达。

× When I was 18, I went through the loyalist part in my life and didn't know what to do.

✓ When I was 18, I went through the loneliest part in my life and didn't know what to do.

'loyalist'拼写错误，应为'loneliest'，表示最孤独的时期。

× But whenever I feel upset, I would listen to music and sing songs, especially a song called Shenyang.

✓ But whenever I felt upset, I would listen to music and sing songs, especially a song called Shenyang.

描述过去习惯动作，主句用过去时，条件状语从句也应使用过去时'felt'。

× When I listen that song or sing that song, I feel full of power and energy to do something.

✓ When I listen to that song or sing that song, I feel full of power and energy to do something.

动词'listen'后应加介词'to'，表示听某物。